it's a hollow play, but they'll clap anyway

Sep 24, 2008 15:38

I have finally gotten around to watching Samurai Champloo. It's probably a little sad, but my first thought after finishing the series was "now I can finally read all those Mugen/Jin fics of redex's and actually get them". Such is the life of a fandom brat, I suppose. The series itself was extremely awesome though, as I'm sure everyone but me already ( Read more... )

life on mars, fic

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jean_geanie September 24 2008, 15:20:00 UTC
This is beautiful and haunting, I love how you've interwoven the scenes with a younger Sam's musings on the children's story. The way you've drawn the comparisons is just compelling and I really love how you highlight all the other possible ways for that final scene between Vic and Sam to play out.

Brilliant! (and memmed)

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teethlikedog September 29 2008, 14:57:56 UTC
Thank you very much; glad you enjoyed. I actually originally started out writing this because I wanted to explore some alternate endings for that scene, so I'm pleased that part worked.

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silvaa September 24 2008, 15:24:11 UTC
Oh I loved this, beautifully written. Young Sam's naivety that he can make everything better, and Old Sam's realisation that he can't. Breathtaking

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teethlikedog September 29 2008, 15:00:20 UTC
Realising we can't fix everything is one of those things we all go through as we grow up, and I find it tremendously fun to torment characters with their own helplessness. Glad you liked!

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severinne September 24 2008, 16:54:39 UTC
This is such a great concept and it's told in an utterly fantastic way. I love the use of the folklore analogies you've drawn out here and the quick flickering between all these alternate worlds and ways that ending could have gone between them. Simply, beautifully done.

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teethlikedog September 29 2008, 15:03:48 UTC
Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed. I have a bit of a thing for folklore and fairytales, so this was quite fun for me to write.

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candesgirl September 24 2008, 17:26:17 UTC
This is a really gorgeous piece, a wonderful play on old fairy tales that seem very fitting to the series. Excellent job.

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teethlikedog September 29 2008, 15:05:23 UTC
Thanks, I'm pleased you think it worked well in the context of the episode. I always find that particular scene to have a bit of a surreal aspect to it (as numerous scenes throughout the series do) so it was fun to just take that and run with it.

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redex September 24 2008, 23:32:14 UTC
Haha, nice to know you thought of me. Pretty much the only writer I've found who can do the threesome properly is Laura Bryannan. You'll have to log in if you want to see the sex-rated stuff, apparently. It's been a while since I've been to ficwad...

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teethlikedog September 29 2008, 15:07:18 UTC
I haven't got a ficwad account, but for hot threesome pr0n I might just be tempted to sign up. And yes, it's quite pathetic, but I really was thinking of being able to read your Mugen/Jin stuff when I finished the series. I've read some of it before, I'm quite sure, but it's always better when you know the canon.

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redex September 29 2008, 15:43:42 UTC
Umm, I think she has another website or two around... aha. No, it's not pathetic at all! Haha, it makes me feel very superstaresque. XD; I hope it lives up to expectation now.

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