Star-Crossed Ch. 10

[teerqesskq]

Title: Star-Crossed
Author: Me 
Pairing: Leah/Bella 
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter) 
Warnings: None
Summary: After the death of her father, Leah couldn't figure out how anything could get worse, but it does. It seems that just when she's starting to understanding who she is, an event turns her whole life upside down.  Nothing, she believes, is ever going

Comments

[gabbie217]

As long as Leah/Bella/Rosalie/Emmett/Victoria are fine, I don't care how ugly it gets. I'm fact, if you wish to have Jacob choke on that chicken bone we talked about a long time ago, I am still willing for that! Haha. Or maybe Sam could be the one to choke on a bone. Or maybe Rose can snap his neck. Or Emmett can punch him into outer space. Or- my ideas are just getting weirder and weirder so I'll stop. ;]

Grrr. Sam. Grr.

It's really creepy by the bathrooms tonight. This new family showed up and I'm pretty sure they're either the creatures from the hills have eyes or wrong turn. I honestly thought he was going to eat me when we passed by the dad or whatever he is. But one: I needed a shower and two: I had to check lj.

I re-read this chapter whilst waiting for the showers and I cried again. How could Sam be so cruel? Poor Leah.

You bring so many emotions out in me with your writing. I want to be furious because of Edward/Sam, but I'm sad for Leah. I want to be sad, but I'm happy you updated with such an amazing chapter. I want to be happy, but I'm impatient for another chapter. I'm going to explode.

long comment is long.

<3

[teerqesskq]

uh oh. you might care how ugly it gets then...

That's really weird. Are you saying the family looks like...deformed?

lol. don't explode, I need your comments to live!. hahaha.