Wake me up (Wake me up inside) for psharp10

May 29, 2015 21:39

Title: Wake me up (Wake me up inside)
For: psharp10
Author: galestrikes
Rating: PG-13
Length: 2228w
Summary: Minseok is a guy that values sleep more than most people.

It’s about 5pm in the afternoon when Minseok, arms laden with groceries, notices the moving truck outside his apartment building. )

for:psharp10, pairing:xiuho, rating:pg15

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psharp10 May 30 2015, 06:30:06 UTC
ahh ok i'm back (sorry that took a while) but let me talk about this fic from the beginning to the end (bc i love all of it ;u;)

when i first saw the title i thought you were going to put an angsty spin on the prompt (bc evanescence u know) but then it turned out to be actually pretty sweet and really nice and i loved it???? and i really love the title you chose for the fic heh

also confused minseok who sleeps a lot and junmyeon who's just everywhere with his blinding smile and good looks i'm so !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

also this:

(Around nine hours a day plus a cat nap peppered here and there. Zitao tries to tell him that it’s probably not healthy to sleep as much as he does, but then again Zitao almost always looks like he gets about three hours of sleep a year, so what does he know?)

is probably one of my favorite parts of the fic bc i'm like a mix of zitao and minseok, i love to sleep but i don't get enough sleep and i probably look like how minseok described zitao (ahh dark circles ://)

but honestly, i'm super super happy with how you included those little details of junmyeon being an anime fan (with the jpop alarm clock song lmao) and minseok and junmyeon being so comfortable around each other, and it all seems so natural -- even the dialogue, it all fits in so easily with the fic and i can imagine it all happening so well and ugh it's so so so great i'm in love

and even the ending was great!! i love how you left it sort of open but answering all the questions i needed answers too ;~~~; this is so great i'm so happy my gift fic was something so great~ thank you!! ♥♥♥

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