Re: Stop Waiting For the Punch Line 1b/2ladyladeSeptember 12 2011, 16:10:08 UTC
“Stiles,” Derek says, prompting him, and Stiles flinches when he starts walking towards him.
“So, hey, how’s Scott’s training going? Don’t you have something to do with him? Like, right now?” Stiles says.
Derek just shakes his head, and they have a slow-walk chase around the room until Derek finally corners Stiles against a wall. He gets right up into Stile’s space, just like he usually does, but this time he’s boxing Stiles in with hands against the wall and a stare instead of a glare.
“This isn’t funny, Derek,” Stiles says, squirming and turning his head away.
“Stiles, when have I ever joked about anything?” Derek asks.
“Well, there was this one time-”
“Stiles,” Derek says.
The kid finally meets his gaze.
“I like you,” Derek says. “This isn’t a joke. Stop being stupid.”
“See, if you had said that in the first place I probably wouldn’t have freaked,” Stiles says. “Also, really?”
Derek keeps trying to figure out why he thinks this is a good idea.
“Yes, really,” he says.
“No punch line?”
“No punch line,” Derek confirms.
“Oh,” Stiles says, and then starts grinning in a way that makes Derek nervous. “This is going to be awesome.”
Re: THE ABOVE IS THE LAST PART.melficeSeptember 12 2011, 17:21:56 UTC
*flails stupidly* Oh god you are seriously my favorite writer in this fandom. Every time I see you post a fill I freak out a little inside. In a good way.
LIKE STILES, THIS IS MY AWKWARD WAY OF SAYING THIS IS AWESOME.
Re: THE ABOVE IS THE LAST PART.ladyladeSeptember 12 2011, 19:33:06 UTC
Oh my god, I saw your comment and I got to "favorite writer in this fandom" and I flipped my fucking shit. I literally did a happy dance in my chair and now I think my cat is afraid I had a seizure.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR AWESOME COMMENT. IT MADE MY ENTIRE MONTH.
Re: Stop Waiting For the Punch Line 1b/2mime0_0September 12 2011, 18:39:53 UTC
i love when i sign in to find inbox alerts. ahaha, i loved the story, it was funny and intresting as it was from dereks pov an there arent many of those ( that i have come accross) so well done.
Re: Stop Waiting For the Punch Line 1b/2ladyladeSeptember 12 2011, 19:35:09 UTC
Thank you! I was actually really nervous about writing Derek because the guy embodies monosyllabic. It's pretty easy to write Stiles because I'm easily distracted and barely have a brain-to-mouth filter and I get really happy over stupid shit all the time, but Derek's so internal that I was afraid I'd just completely miss the mark with him. I'm glad that you thought he was well-written!
Re: Stop Waiting For the Punch Line 1b/2mime0_0September 12 2011, 19:38:42 UTC
even monosyllables is pushing it with derek he just galres at the effing time, but he was well written and if he spoke more i reckon he would be more like that. i think thats why stiles is t he most loved character in the fandom (go through the prompts almost ALL of them feature STILES, the poor guy), cause we all have the brains of an infant and wanna be adorable and able to eat junk food all the time.
Re: Stop Waiting For the Punch Line 1b/2olukemiSeptember 13 2011, 17:32:34 UTC
Jesus Christ, I laughed so hard I had a coughing fit. Thank you for nearly killing me with awesome! And can I just say your Derek is one of the best things in the world. Almost better than Nutella.
“So, hey, how’s Scott’s training going? Don’t you have something to do with him? Like, right now?” Stiles says.
Derek just shakes his head, and they have a slow-walk chase around the room until Derek finally corners Stiles against a wall. He gets right up into Stile’s space, just like he usually does, but this time he’s boxing Stiles in with hands against the wall and a stare instead of a glare.
“This isn’t funny, Derek,” Stiles says, squirming and turning his head away.
“Stiles, when have I ever joked about anything?” Derek asks.
“Well, there was this one time-”
“Stiles,” Derek says.
The kid finally meets his gaze.
“I like you,” Derek says. “This isn’t a joke. Stop being stupid.”
“See, if you had said that in the first place I probably wouldn’t have freaked,” Stiles says. “Also, really?”
Derek keeps trying to figure out why he thinks this is a good idea.
“Yes, really,” he says.
“No punch line?”
“No punch line,” Derek confirms.
“Oh,” Stiles says, and then starts grinning in a way that makes Derek nervous. “This is going to be awesome.”
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LIKE STILES, THIS IS MY AWKWARD WAY OF SAYING THIS IS AWESOME.
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR AWESOME COMMENT. IT MADE MY ENTIRE MONTH.
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...IF I DIDN'T MAKE IT OBVIOUS, (I'm sure I didn't) I'M USING CAPSLOCK TO EXPRESS MY HAPPINESSS!
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ahaha, i loved the story, it was funny and intresting as it was from dereks pov an there arent many of those ( that i have come accross) so well done.
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Also, I swear I'm not a creepster lies but I was wondering if I could friend you. You seem like awesome peeps. Sans radioactive color coating.
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