Beta reader wanted for a longer Peter/Lydia fic
Title: Always an Alpha
Genre: Mystery
Pairings/characters: Peter/Lydia
Type of beta you'd like: SpaG, some nitpicking on flow/plot would be awesome, too
Length, or word count: 75k and counting (though the first 27k are posted and beta-read)
Short Summary: Well, the underlying plot is that thanks to the ritual in the fall of 2012, finally some "things" have come to Beacon Hills shortly before Spring Break 2013. While numerous killings happens and Scott, the Argents, Stiles and the other remaining werewolves try to figure what is going on, Lydia is recruited against her will by Peter for what he says is an exorcism to get Derek de-possessed.
As a result suddenly everyone is convinced that Peter is probably behind the killings, too and Lydia only insists it is not him because he has influenced her again.
There is also mentions of other relationships going on but they are really not the focus.
More info
The already posted Chapter 2 btw has dub-con involved (Peter/Lydia/Not!Derek) and it is mentioned and sort of dealt with throughout the first half of the story. Chapter 10 has a Lydia/Twins sex scene and much later there will be at least one more Peter/Lydia scene. So far I am at chapter 15 (which the previous three still needing editing by me) and going strong.
I really love for someone to look at chapter 6 so my readers don't have to wait too long. And a beta for the whole thing would be super awesome.
If someone can't do SpaG and just wants to nitpick on plot things and characterization that is fine, too. Just as only SpaG is appreciated, too. I just think it always improves the story to have a beta look over things. So you can't be to harsh or nit-picky for me but you don't have to either if that is not your style. I am pretty easy going that way.
Genre: Mystery
Pairings/characters: Peter/Lydia
Type of beta you'd like: SpaG, some nitpicking on flow/plot would be awesome, too
Length, or word count: 75k and counting (though the first 27k are posted and beta-read)
Short Summary: Well, the underlying plot is that thanks to the ritual in the fall of 2012, finally some "things" have come to Beacon Hills shortly before Spring Break 2013. While numerous killings happens and Scott, the Argents, Stiles and the other remaining werewolves try to figure what is going on, Lydia is recruited against her will by Peter for what he says is an exorcism to get Derek de-possessed.
As a result suddenly everyone is convinced that Peter is probably behind the killings, too and Lydia only insists it is not him because he has influenced her again.
There is also mentions of other relationships going on but they are really not the focus.
More info
The already posted Chapter 2 btw has dub-con involved (Peter/Lydia/Not!Derek) and it is mentioned and sort of dealt with throughout the first half of the story. Chapter 10 has a Lydia/Twins sex scene and much later there will be at least one more Peter/Lydia scene. So far I am at chapter 15 (which the previous three still needing editing by me) and going strong.
I really love for someone to look at chapter 6 so my readers don't have to wait too long. And a beta for the whole thing would be super awesome.
If someone can't do SpaG and just wants to nitpick on plot things and characterization that is fine, too. Just as only SpaG is appreciated, too. I just think it always improves the story to have a beta look over things. So you can't be to harsh or nit-picky for me but you don't have to either if that is not your style. I am pretty easy going that way.