Chaos Theory [13/?]

Nov 03, 2006 19:55


Title: Chaos Theory [13/?]
Pairing: House/Cameron
Rating: R
Summary: They would never dream of breaking this fixation. Proximity can be a dangerous thing.
Author’s Note: I am so sorry for the unbelievably long wait. This chapter is more filler than anything, so it probably doesn’t involve the drama you’ve been waiting for. The next one is the doozy ( Read more... )

fic: chaos theory (series), house fic

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biases November 3 2006, 09:24:14 UTC
HOLY SHIT.

I was typing up my own fic and talking to my friend on msn and I casually glanced over at my flist and saw this and the conversation went like this: *copy/pastes*

Bek says: HOLY FUCK
Bek says: I HAVE TO GO
Bek says: MY FAVOURITE HOUSE/CAMERON FIC JUST GOT UPDATED
Bek says: BACK SOON

And man, oh man. So good. You said it was filler but it felt like...feelings. Like raw and angry and worried and scared and it was amazing to see their reactions to their time away, how they managed to not-deal, how they were able to hide it (kind of) from their workmates and friends. You nailed Wilson, and Chase and Foreman's part was fantastic. I loved the bit where Chase capitulated after three seconds, and my favourite line was:

Wilson sighed in exasperation. “Forget it. You’re going to evade me, as usual. I’m going to get frustrated until you say something really insulting to distract me, and then I’ll leave. I think I’ll just skip all that this time.”

YOU KNOW THEM SO WELL. Gah. Gah! I have no words! I'm coming across as an idiot! But I love this story and I love your writing and now I'm all jazzed for the whole week. I can't wait for the next installment, but this will more than suffice in tiding me over until you can write again. Thank you, thank you for updating this! ♥

(And randomly, I have a whole House-hiding thing in my next chapter. I'm thinking it's his way of dealing with important stuff. I just wanted to tell you now so it didn't look like I was copying or anything, but I was devouring the chapter and then I saw the hiding bit and I was like, "Wah, I hope it doesn't seem like I stole it!" I'll fiddle with the wording but there'll still be hiding in it. Just a heads-up)

LOVE YOU.

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teenwitch77 November 5 2006, 04:29:10 UTC
HEE!

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THAT MADE ME GRIN.

I am so glad you liked it, especially the Chase/Foreman characterisations, because I don't play with them nearly enough and their banter is hard to get down. And I tell you what, your fic totally jazzed me for the whole week, so we're even *grins*

LOVE YOU BACK ♥

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