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teenhearthrob

SHORT STORY

Apr 01, 2004 14:56

here is an exerpt from a short story im composing ( Read more... )

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corrections smokyeyes April 1 2004, 12:48:18 UTC

pissed-negative connotation
pissa(h)-positive connotation
so unless he was particularly overjoyed by the fact that he didn't actually slay the dragons then no, that's not "ok".

Re: corrections teenhearthrob April 1 2004, 16:03:20 UTC

do not gimme shits
or ill show to you what correcting really means

Re: corrections smokyeyes April 1 2004, 17:26:10 UTC

don't start with me, fascist dictator.

Re: corrections teenhearthrob April 1 2004, 17:42:47 UTC

im in a 3 point stance racing towards global domination

Re: left side down block for me, crappy. smokyeyes April 1 2004, 17:47:48 UTC

I am a communist, this "domination" is for us to "share", hold my hand?

Re: left side down block for me, crappy. teenhearthrob April 1 2004, 17:49:30 UTC

okay but im going to be the dominator and you can be the assistant dominator

Re: left side down block for me, crappy. smokyeyes April 1 2004, 17:50:57 UTC

when I said share I mean with the "people".

Re: left side down block for me, crappy. teenhearthrob April 1 2004, 17:56:41 UTC

if we have to share than how can i be a ruthless dictator
that gets to kill people a lot

Re: reverse punch for me, crappy. smokyeyes April 1 2004, 17:58:34 UTC

yeah, you're not "down" with the cause. get "with" it, or get "out", moshe.

Re: reverse punch for me, crappy. teenhearthrob April 2 2004, 08:12:42 UTC

im gonna punch you in the nose

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