I be needing a beta...

[teenage_hustler]

I've managed to finish my second draft for takingitinturns , so I now deem it fit to be looked at, criticised and considered by a second party.

Any takers? It's long, because, well, I wrote it, and all of my stuff is long. About 10K. But I think it's nice, if erratic in places.

Let me know.