You And I: Rethinking

[technicolornina]

Title: You And I: Rethinking
Author: Ninalyn/technicolornina
Fandom: Adam Lambert
Pairing/Characters: Adam Lambert, Kris Allen, Katy Allen (past), Brad Bell, Kesha, Lady Gaga, Neil Lambert, various and sundry OCs
Word Count: 8087
Story Rating: R
Chapter Rating: R. Adam likes to swear. Angel likes to swear even more.
Story Summary: Seven years after Idol, Adam and

Comments

[choose2live]

So, Angel's an intriguing OC, liking him (though not to stick around for too long). I'm LOL at Adam's house being hangout spot for Gaga - doesn't seem too far out there, though my idea of Adam has him living a bit more grandly than yours. (IMHO Adam's decade trying to make it in H'wood has instilled him with a clear vision of what it means to Make It in his mind, and he's taking great pleasure in creating that reality around him, with the house in the Hills and maybe a Maserati next, etc. Not going OTT, but definitely enjoying where life is taking him)

Kinda wanted to yell at everybody for not immediately thinking "heart attack" when Jerry started feeling bad. I understand not twigging to it when he said his arm was numb, since Brad HAD been lying on him, but after that I wanted to collectively shake the room. Poor Jerry and Brad. :(

I love Adam's bewilderment at Angel's surprise over Kris' acceptance. LOVE the idea that Adam knows Kris so well that such a thought doesn't enter his head.

Also liking the little clues you're dropping about how Katy died, and its effect on Kris. And in general, I like how you've got a bunch of little threads going here - like Angel's sudden DQ from Idol - that tell me you're building a (hopefully long) well-rounded story.