DW Fic: Stolen (Ten/Rose)

[goldy_dollar]

Title: Stolen
Pairing: Ten/Rose
Rating: PG13
Summary: He was only supposed to look, that’s all. Post-Waters of Mars and pre-Doomsday.
Warnings: Daaaaaaaaark - I hesitated over whether it needs a dub-con warning or not and never really came to a decision.
Excerpt: Worse than that, though, he’s lied to Rose. He’s let her think he is someone else-

Comments

[captaintish]

Oh, deliciously angsty! Is it rude of me to hope that the Habs lose more often? ;P

[goldy_dollar]

Thank you! And DON'T YOU EVEN SAY THAT. *knocks on wood*

[captaintish]

LOL :D

[professor_spork]

Jesus. That was... intense. Though not, I admit, as dark as I anticipated it being thanks to all the warnings. (That said, I'm glad they're there. Without them, it definitely would have been quite the shock.)

Oh, Doctor. I just... this absolutely broke my heart. And my favorite thing about it, I think, is that it's so shiningly obvious why he'd miss her so much. Despite the rather extreme circumstances, you've still made sure her humor and her understanding and her innate Roseness come through. She's not just the goal or the girl he goes back for; she does more than make the plot go. I've seen a few variations on this general idea in fic, but this is by far the best of them, because they're still equals-- even when he's cheating, even when she has no idea what's going on.

[goldy_dollar]

Thanks! Yeah, I really wasn't sure on the "dub con" thing, but ultimately he does get her to consent under false pretenses and the mind wipe at the end is pretty creepy. :D Oh crazy Ten, you live on in my heart.

Despite the rather extreme circumstances, you've still made sure her humor and her understanding and her innate Roseness come through. She's not just the goal or the girl he goes back for; she does more than make the plot go.

Yeah, writing Rose was a bit challenging because it was all from Ten's POV who is... cracking up... but I really wanted his need for her to come though, so I'm really glad it worked for you. :D

[a_white_rain]

I WILL READ THIS LATER AND REVIEW I PROMISE.

[goldy_dollar]

:D NO PRESSURE.

[mrsdianablack]

oh my god..this is beautiful, and sad..and dark..and I love it.

[goldy_dollar]

Thank you so much! It was a bit different for me, so I'm glad you liked it. :D

[teruel_a_witch]

OMG CRAZY!YEN YOU CAME BACK TO ME ♥ I didn't even realize how much I missed him, thank you thank you, this was GLORIOUS and might I say, unusually explicit for you *waggles eyebrows* which I approve of course ;D I notice crazy!Ten brings out your naughtier side ;) But I digress, THIS is what should have happened in a fair world instead of 3-seconds rendezvous in EoT, this resembles a reward much more, it's a shame he had to wipe her memory though, it is so heart-wrenching she does not remember that he actually SAID those words :(

She turns, pressing her face into his neck. He slips his hands out from under her shirt, sensing her need for a hug.
AWWW ♥ They are just so sweet, aren't they? Seriously, it was a crime to tear them apart, hate the Universe :/

He shuts his eyes against the words and lowers his forehead to press against hers. He stays quiet, letting the seconds tick by, the room seeming to grow quieter and quieter. Finally, his mouth feeling dry, he whispers, “I love you.”
Gawd I wish to see that so much :(

He can’t-he

[goldy_dollar]

OMG CRAZY!YEN YOU CAME BACK TO ME

HE LIVES ON IN MY HEART. :D

I didn't even realize how much I missed him, thank you thank you, this was GLORIOUS and might I say, unusually explicit for you *waggles eyebrows* which I approve of course

In my head, it was a lot more explicit than it ended up being in the final version.... idk, I guess I think of Crazy Ten as being really horny for some reason.

AWWW ♥ They are just so sweet, aren't they? Seriously, it was a crime to tear them apart, hate the Universe :/

*SQUISHES THEM*

Gawd I wish to see that so much :(

At first I debated over whether or not to include his I love you, but then I was like... W/E IT NEEDS SAYING, COME ON CRAZY DYING TEN.

The scale of his love is what made me so hang up on the pairing so I must not complain XD

*nods*

That was very painfully enjoyable and wonderful, you serve crazy!Ten at his best :D

Thank you!! I'm so pleased you like it. :D

[teruel_a_witch]

HE LIVES ON IN MY HEART. :D
HE LIVES IN MINE TOO :D

In my head, it was a lot more explicit than it ended up being in the final version....
*pouts* I AM DISAPPOINTED NOW ;) xDD

idk, I guess I think of Crazy Ten as being really horny for some reason.
*giggle* Maybe you just think of him very sexy and your brain projects that onto his actions in fic ;D Cos, you know, no one can pull off such a sexy crazy ass impression like Ten *Rawr*
And in my head Ten is almost always horny when around Rose anyway, it's def. David's, ehem, charisma's fault ;)

W/E IT NEEDS SAYING, COME ON CRAZY DYING TEN.
DITTO. Crazy!Ten, no matter how paradoxically that sounds, is MUCH wiser then emo!Ten XD

And thank youu, I'm always so ridiculously pleased when you write Ten/Rose again, as much as I love TenToo/Rose (and it's THIS MUCH) I loved Ten/Rose first and my heart still resides there most of times and I miss them SFM ♥