DW Fic: Stolen Kisses (Ten/Rose)

[goldy_dollar]

Title: Stolen Kisses
Pairing: Ten/Rose
Summary: What’s crossing universes after breaking the most fundamental rule of time travel? Nothing.
Spoilers: Waters of Mars
Rating: PG13
A/N: Not betaed so I apologize in advance for any typos that got by me.
Excerpt: She gives him a long, inquisitive look and he shifts uncomfortably, feeling like his ruse

Comments

[shinyopals]

AWW.

(Yes, I read it. You're a bad influence on me.)

*Pets them*

Also, I deny it's happening.

I like that she knows from the start and plays along for a bit.

Also, NO SONGS ARE ENDING HERE.

*CLINGS*

"Dumpster" feels a bit American by the way. "Dustbin" or "bin are probably better, but we do occasionally use "dumpster" here.

*Continues to pet them*

I now require fluff, btw.

[goldy_dollar]

AWW.

(Yes, I read it. You're a bad influence on me.)

*Pets them*

Also, I deny it's happening.

*SMOOCH*

I like that she knows from the start and plays along for a bit.

Yeah, I sort of feel like Ten showing up out of nowhere and being like "I AM TOTALLY THE OTHER ME :D :D :D" would work on Rose for about five minutes. XD

"Dumpster" feels a bit American by the way. "Dustbin" or "bin are probably better, but we do occasionally use "dumpster" here.

XD SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN I DON'T SEND YOU MY ANGST TO BETA READ.

I now require fluff, btw.

Merp.

[shinyopals]

*Taps foot*

FLUFF.

[beck_liz]

*SOB* You meanie.

I knew she knew. I loved that.

[goldy_dollar]

XD

Yeah, I really wanted to make sure she knew to avoid squicky consensual issues and also because it would probably be SO OBVIOUS to her after about five minutes.

Thanks!

[dashafeather]

Really Awesome. I like how Rose totally didn't buy it was him, and that he wanted a last goodbye, aw. And then he briefly considered kidnapping her, I loved that too.

And the kissing. I liked the kissing a lot. xD

[goldy_dollar]

Thank you!

And then he briefly considered kidnapping her, I loved that too.

I briefly considered a "crazy Ten kidnaps Rose" fic, and this was kind of my compromise. XD

And the kissing. I liked the kissing a lot. xD

:D :D

[scornedsaint]

Um, I don't really have much to say because I'm kind of wanting to cry, but this was very awesome and so sweet and so perfect.

“Rose,” he says, shaking his sleeve out after she’s finished with it, “you understand why I left you, don’t you?”

“Yeah, I do,” she says, “most of the time, anyway.”

Aw, this is so happy/sad. Because it sucks that they got in that situation, but at the same time I just really want her to understand that and not hate him.

[goldy_dollar]

Um, I don't really have much to say because I'm kind of wanting to cry, but this was very awesome and so sweet and so perfect.

Thanks! I really need to stop writing regeneration fic now, I think. D:

Aw, this is so happy/sad. Because it sucks that they got in that situation, but at the same time I just really want her to understand that and not hate him.

Aww, I don't think Rose could ever hate him. Plus in some ways I think Bad Wolf Bay II is like one of the most obvious examples of just HOW MUCH he loves her, you know?

[scornedsaint]

Plus in some ways I think Bad Wolf Bay II is like one of the most obvious examples of just HOW MUCH he loves her, you know?

Oh, definitely. It was such a sad but lovely moment. But at the same time, those first couple of weeks must have sucked for Rose (and Ten II). To be left on that beach again? That would blow. But I think you're right.

[_thirty2flavors]

Aww poor crazy Ten, starting the noble tradition of molesting Rose in alleyways.

“Tell me about it,” he says, pleased when he gets a small laugh in return. It’s the closest he’s ever come to saying it, and it’s not lost on either of them.

Aww emotionally dysfunctional Ten. LIRL

I liked this. There should definitely be moar crazy Ten. And he didn't even try to steal Cloen's girlfriend, which seems like a step in the right direction.

[goldy_dollar]

Aww poor crazy Ten, starting the noble tradition of molesting Rose in alleyways.

Indeed. He is very suave that way.

Aww emotionally dysfunctional Ten. LIRL

Yeah, I figured it would be pretty IC after WoM for him to show up, kiss the girl, and then NEVER EXPLAIN ANY OF IT before swanning off again. Poor Rose. For a while I thought about writing a follow up fic between Rose and Cloen but I feel like that would be the most awkward conversation ever.

I liked this. There should definitely be moar crazy Ten. And he didn't even try to steal Cloen's girlfriend, which seems like a step in the right direction.

Thanks! I compromised on the "stealing Cloen's girlfriend" bit by having him briefly consider it for a moment. XD

[_thirty2flavors]

He would totally never explain any of it. He doesn't really explain things when he's all-there in the first place, so he would probably not explain them when he is on the red-eye flight to Crazytown.

LOL Poor Cloen. I am sure he would appreciate his crazy counterpart making out with his wife behind a dumpster.

Also, omfg, Hamlet. I feel it is compensating very well for the absence of Crazy Ten. I mean really.

[juliet316]

Crap! That photo freaked me out!