Ongoing happy debate (amidst the ridiculous other DW debating of this past weekend) pertained to the question of all questions...pinpointing the moment where all the shagging began! ;) I love how everything in this story plays out so believably, from the couch scene to getting lost in the TARDIS to the last scene with Jackie, which is perfect.
Lines that made me laugh out loud at work, invoking unwanted curiosity from the co-workers:
“It was just…” Rose squeezed him tighter. “Sometimes I look at you-and it’s just… it’s so much. It’s feeling so many things, Doctor. And I just sort of thought… ‘God, I really need a chocolate chip cookie.’”
He nudged her in the shoulder. “Yep,” she said. “Big… rats. Huge.”
Jackie turned around to head back into the kitchen, but then she paused, nailing the Doctor with a fierce stare. He stood up straighter and fiddled nervously with his collar.
“And you better be careful,” she said. “You get her pregnant with your alien offspring and I’m going to kill you.”
Ongoing happy debate (amidst the ridiculous other DW debating of this past weekend) pertained to the question of all questions...pinpointing the moment where all the shagging began!
I love that debate! There seems to be some kind of consensus surrounding "Fear Her," however. This is probably important. For... um, fanfic purposes. XD
I love how everything in this story plays out so believably, from the couch scene to getting lost in the TARDIS to the last scene with Jackie, which is perfect.
Thank you! I actually had a lot of fun writing this, even if it's a little fluffy even for ME. I sort of ended up with two different fics initially, though, so I'm glad it seemed coherent. *G*
And thanks for pointing our your favourite lines! I have so much squee. :D
HA. I think the snog WAS the delayed revenge. (And also, the Jackie Tyler way of giving her blessing. *G*) I'm good with fitting my fic neatly into canon. :D
Aww! Dances and giggles and joy. You're the best. *smooch*
I also love how, this too is slated into the 'time after Fear Her and before AoG when Rose and Ten clearly went on a number of fabulous adventures and had lots of sex and babies' time.
This is, obviously, a given. I like to believe that there was tons of time between FH and AoG for Ten and Rose to bounce around in and squee at each other. And have sex!
I don't think Nine would have gotten away with it.
Ten's just so cute when he's trying to be innocent, heh. :D
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I really, really love it. Perfect! *squishes you*
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Lines that made me laugh out loud at work, invoking unwanted curiosity from the co-workers:
“It was just…” Rose squeezed him tighter. “Sometimes I look at you-and it’s just… it’s so much. It’s feeling so many things, Doctor. And I just sort of thought… ‘God, I really need a chocolate chip cookie.’”
He nudged her in the shoulder. “Yep,” she said. “Big… rats. Huge.”
Jackie turned around to head back into the kitchen, but then she paused, nailing the Doctor with a fierce stare. He stood up straighter and fiddled nervously with his collar.
“And you better be careful,” she said. “You get her pregnant with your alien offspring and I’m going to kill you.”
LOVE THIS FIC. *memories*
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I love that debate! There seems to be some kind of consensus surrounding "Fear Her," however. This is probably important. For... um, fanfic purposes. XD
I love how everything in this story plays out so believably, from the couch scene to getting lost in the TARDIS to the last scene with Jackie, which is perfect.
Thank you! I actually had a lot of fun writing this, even if it's a little fluffy even for ME. I sort of ended up with two different fics initially, though, so I'm glad it seemed coherent. *G*
And thanks for pointing our your favourite lines! I have so much squee. :D
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Of course, it could be that the snog at the start of AoG was her delayed revenge. :D
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I also love how, this too is slated into the 'time after Fear Her and before AoG when Rose and Ten clearly went on a number of fabulous adventures and had lots of sex and babies' time.
This is, obviously, a given. I like to believe that there was tons of time between FH and AoG for Ten and Rose to bounce around in and squee at each other. And have sex!
I don't think Nine would have gotten away with it.
Ten's just so cute when he's trying to be innocent, heh. :D
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