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Fic: The Boy Is Gone 10/20?

Oct 09, 2008 11:39

TITLE: The Boy Is Gone 10/20?
AUTHOR: Erin Giles
DISCLAIMER: Torchwood and its characters are property of the BBC. The Family Jones is of my own creation.
RATING: PG-15
PAIRINGS/CHARACTERS: Jack/Ianto, Gwen/Rhys, OC's
SUMMARY: The Rift has never been the most stable influence in Ianto Jones’ life but when children in Cardiff start disappearing ( Read more... )

fic: the boy is gone, fandom: torchwood, series: footprints in the sand, janto

Comments 28

pinkfairy727 October 9 2008, 12:18:03 UTC

YAY! UPDATE!!!!!!

God this is painful! How long until you make everything better...you are going to make it better aren't you?!

erin_giles October 9 2008, 14:22:49 UTC

Oh shit! Was I supposed to make everything better?! *edits* XP

And I promise to get at least a few more chapters up before next weekend... *is far too excited about the Hub*

adafrog October 9 2008, 12:30:08 UTC

Lovely, thanks.

shara50 October 9 2008, 13:14:11 UTC

Wonderful but very painfull, more soon please:)

erin_giles October 10 2008, 13:35:41 UTC

Thank you. And painful was what I was going for is this chapter - subtle but painful. More soon definately. After the next chapter the rest of the story is pretty much finished.

WOW tomkatt October 9 2008, 13:47:14 UTC

The passage below was brilliant and I think it takes your writing to another level. It made me smile, cry and literary all at the same time. You've captured a truth for a lot of people... a truth that some just can't put into words. And you did. Amazing! ***breathes deeply***

"Ianto had let a knowing shy smile cross his lips at that which is when Jack had interrupted them with his own lewd comment about how Ianto smelt after sex. Ianto to her smelt like coffee and the refreshing smell of new books, unless of course he’d spent the night with Jack then it seemed no matter how many showers he took throughout the course of the day he still smelt like Jack..........Gwen found herself breathing in the scent of Rhys deeply, again trying to define what he smelt of so she could finally tell Ianto when he got back. But again words failed her, Rhys just smelt like home."

Re: WOW erin_giles October 10 2008, 13:38:36 UTC

Thank you so much. It was very much written from the heart because I saw one of my best friends recently who I've not seen in six months and as I was hugging him I realised how much I missed the smell of him and how comforting it was. I'm glad this touched you! :)

luvinthe88and20 October 9 2008, 14:38:07 UTC

Great update. You can really fell everybodies pain in this.

erin_giles October 10 2008, 13:39:32 UTC

Thank you. And that's what I was going for - one big whallop of pain (which I think is basically the whole story). ;)