fic: once entwined

[tearful_eye]

eep, i wrote a ficlet -

title. once entwined
focus. doctor who/torchwood, martha/ianto. tiny touches of jack/ianto, etc.
genre. angst, bit romanc-y, het. au, sort of.
summary. 'for just that one moment - right there, between two shared breaths - they could forget the world around them still existed.' - 1st part takes place during the year that never

Comments

[mellyna]

Beautiful and heartbreaking. Lovely work. Thanks for sharing.

[tearful_eye]

:) thank you so much -
i'm glad you like this!

[persiflage_1]

Oh interesting idea and nicely done...

[tearful_eye]

yeah, i love the idea of all kinds of people meeting during the year that never was... & martha/ianto was just the logical conclusion, *g*

& thanks.

[kendermouse]

This is STUNNINGLY beautiful. Quietly painful yet beautifully hopeful. A glimpse of a time that never was but a love that could be, if not for the intervention of time.

And that Jack understands, that Jack grieves her loss, but holds tight to his joy... neither wishes to hurt the other while both wish to hold the young man they care for/love. Both warriors finding strength in Ianto's quiet and careful care of them... even in such different times.

Your use of language is... absolutely amazing. The quiet but powerful images in such mundane things... the scent of her hair, the look in his eyes. So wonderful. "I wish I could never forget you..." - "As much as I love the Doctor" - "You smell like the wilderness, Miss Jones." - "Like freedom."

just.... wow. Absolutely WOW!

This was a wonderful way to start a day.

thank you.

Peace,
km

[tearful_eye]

oh wow, *blushes* thank you so much for that wonderful comment - i think you just made my day :D i absolutely love that you like this so much, *g*

i think you understood this exactly how i wanted it to be read... especially what you said about jack. i often think of ianto as a source of peace & quiet - especially for people like jack or martha, who are loud & active (and need someone to help them calm down)

& since english is not my mother language that compliment really made me *squee* out loud, hee. thank you so much, again.

[offthebalcony]

I've never even thought of shipping them before and... you kind of broke my heart a lot here. This was amazing, seriously.

♥

[tearful_eye]

i know! when i started writing this i didn't have anyone specific in mind... and then i suddnly realized who i was writing about - it HAD to be martha & ianto, they're just, i don't know, kinda awesome together...

& thank you so much for the lovely comment (i hope your heart hasn't suffered any lasting damage though)

[vipersweb]

this is gorgeous. Quite heartbreaking in its simplicity and quietness.

[tearful_eye]

aw, wow, thanks. i'm glad you think such beautiful things of this ;)

...beautiful & quiet is exactly how imagine martha/ianto would be, so - yay!