Comments | teand: Fresh Fic: That Story

teand

Fresh Fic: That Story

Apr 14, 2007 14:14

The angst that ate my brain is finished. And betaed. And adjusted. And I know that Saturday afternoon is a stupid time to post new fic because no one's at their computer and it'll just get lost in the general flotsam and jetsam of the lj world but I have to post this frelling thing before it drives me mad. Mad, I tell you ( Read more... )

fic, supernatural

Comments 14

girlfan1979 October 13 2007, 16:47:14 UTC

"At lunch time today, Bobby Dawson called us poor white trash."

Sammy sounded matter-of-fact rather than upset so Dean bit back his first response and asked, "What did you do?"

"Well, we're poor and we're white, right?"

"Yeah."

"So I only punched him once."

"He get back up again?"

"No. He was crying too hard."

"You get in trouble?"

"Little bit."

"That's my boy."

If I ever have kids? That story will be a parable in my household.

...safe. Nothing could touch him here. Nothing could hurt him.

Oh Dean. As if that's *not* what's happening.

teand October 15 2007, 16:25:39 UTC

Thanks. It was important Sammy be seen in this too...

girlfan1979 October 15 2007, 16:28:54 UTC

Seriously, for the last couple of days, the BF and I have been wandering around saying, "So I only punched him once".

:D

anonymous March 13 2008, 12:53:11 UTC

Superb. Very sophisticated writing with that particular plot.

teand March 13 2008, 17:24:42 UTC

Thank you.

monster_of_hope March 31 2008, 08:45:01 UTC

What really walloped me about your story weren't the moments of incest, but the affect of it on Dean, his tragic combination of naïveté and cynicism.

As others have said, this is "a" John, but it is "the" Dean.

teand April 10 2008, 03:37:57 UTC

Dean as he is, is so tragically broken. I just wanted to see how it might have happened.

And thank you.

ladykatiewench April 4 2008, 02:33:54 UTC

Alright...so, I'm just getting to this and I love it already, but this line...

Last year, he'd even called from a hunt to tell Dean where his present was hidden.

...KILLED ME!

teand April 10 2008, 03:38:28 UTC

Thank you. Although I'm sorry to have killed you...

ladykatiewench April 10 2008, 12:37:53 UTC

It's okay. It's a good kill. I happen to like tortured-but-doesn't-know-it!Dean.

nocturniquette1 February 25 2009, 10:44:29 UTC

You are a very potent writer. Really packing a punch. I can't help but feel for Dean. The see-saw emotions of wanting acceptance, burgeoning sexual awareness and his need to be whatever his father has need of...the parting scene was excellent. Well written, yes, but not losing the impact of confused lust and uncertainty...guilt.

teand February 26 2009, 14:15:52 UTC

Thank you.