And with each mile
CHAPTER 35: ROOFTOP SEX
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Zaylor / Hancest
Pairing: Zac & Taylor
Credits & many Thanks to: Honor @beyondthethorns
About the story: Zac & Taylor's relationship broke up when they got caught kissing by the press and their career were over in a split of a second. To continue a normal life and to take a break from his brother, ( Read more... )
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Zaylor / Hancest
Pairing: Zac & Taylor
Credits & many Thanks to: Honor @beyondthethorns
About the story: Zac & Taylor's relationship broke up when they got caught kissing by the press and their career were over in a split of a second. To continue a normal life and to take a break from his brother, ( Read more... )
I agree with elizabeth_ald that it's the best chapter so far - not just because of the sex, but it really does seem really well balanced, and everything is kind of making sense, the characters are more developed and it shows.
I don't normally quote back bits of smut but the end of the sex scene was brilliant:
"I think I kind of just faded into the moment. I don’t remember a lot of other details. I remember him saying that I was ‘so tight’ which I’d never heard anyone say to me before and it made me think of a porn movie. I remember the sound of his hips slamming against my ass and the scraping of my knees against the brick as he pushed me down harder. I remember how I cried out his name and him saying "You wanted it rough, so you're getting it rough," while my nails were scratching against the bricks. I remember him coming suddenly and unexpectedly, and the tightening of his muscles behind me as he finished off- the way I could feel his biceps flex around me."
That was really good, it had a poetic tone that 'lifted' the sex stuff, if you know what I mean. Great work, ladies!
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