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That Time -- lovetheboys

Mar 19, 2007 22:48

Title: That Time
Author: lovetheboys
Combo(s): John/Teyla/Ronon/Rodney
Archive: Um, sure? Tell me where it's going, I guess.
Rating: PG
Summary: Teyla is a woman, for better or worse...
Warnings: Girlie problems...
Word Count: 1,794
Disclaimer: Not mine. Making no money. These wonderful characters belong to someone else. I'm just playing with them for my own ( Read more... )

rating:pg

Comments 9

briar_pipe March 24 2007, 04:57:46 UTC

Hm. I wonder why no one's talked about this before. I mean, 30toseoul did the whole "two boobs, three grabby men" thing, but here's yet another angle OT4 has that slash doesn't.

Of course, I'm really glad I'm not Teyla. That would suck.

(And I don't have an icon of her wincing, which would be more appropriate...)

fishbaum August 12 2007, 04:11:56 UTC

I just today realized how little OT4 that Crossroads (the archive) has, so I've suggested they include this one! (As well as so much of 30toseoul's stuff!) :)

demilo19 August 12 2007, 20:06:41 UTC

Then I have to thank you so very, VERY much. I love OT4 stuff but Crossroads didn't have much until today and then WHAM! I found this and all of 30toseoul's stuff. Today has been a treat - a wonderful lazy Sunday reading OT4. I can't thank you enough.

demilo19 August 12 2007, 20:11:57 UTC

I adore this fic. Cramps are the worst and I feel for Teyla here but what I really love is that you have the boys not completely understanding but still caring. The befuddlement and the worry is so lovely and you captured it so well without actually saying "we are worried", like And he didn’t mean to sound so mocking but he was torn between thinking that Teyla was stronger than that and worrying because she was stronger than that. The "show" of this fic is really well done that I can't help being a wee bit jealous of her because who wouldn't that type of attention at that time of the month? And the trust when John asks to try something...

Thank you so SO VERY MUCH for a delightful read. I'm so saving this to the hard drive.

lovetheboys February 4 2008, 23:43:51 UTC

Sorry for the much-belated response.

Thank you! I've often been told I'm more of a "teller" than a "shower" so for you to say I did a good job "showing" makes me very happy.

And that it's saved? Is just awesome.

Thanks again!

anonymous August 14 2007, 10:50:03 UTC

Poor Teyla, not much fun for her :(. Poor boys too, they just don't *get* it, so they don't know how to help and can end up sounding a bit dismissive (John). I'm glad John found a way to help that they could all take part in.

Laura.

ladyniko February 4 2008, 20:27:22 UTC

I feel for Teyla here - there have been months where all I've wanted to do was to curl up in bed w/ the heating pad & tell the rest of the world to go away. :-p

Great that John did some research - ironically enough, in western massage (i.e. - US) the abdomen and upper chest are some of the most ignored areas and they are areas that need to be addressed most especially in the female gender.

This was something we addressed over the weekend in my totally awesome hot stone massage class. (Yes, I'm an MT, so pardon me for geeking out here on a story talking about massage working where medicine did not. *laugh*)

Good story! :)

lovetheboys February 4 2008, 22:28:29 UTC

No worries. I maintain that everyone will be a lot happier if they allow themselves to geek about interesting things.

Actually, this story was prompted both by personal experience (not the three hot men, sadly...) and because I found said blog where the woman said her boyfriend massaged her and she felt better.

Thanks for the comment!