fic: Shattered Balances by Tielan - PG-13

[tielan]

fic for 22nd April (bonus)

Title: Shattered Balances
Author: Tielan
Summary: In that moment of focus, before the Meld broke, she felt the others reach for her - an instinctive clutch for the originator, the Nightwing. The reach was instinctive, reckless, doomed. They, too, splintered, as the mind torn loose its ties of loyalty shattered in pain

Comments

[tielan]

LOL. Sorry - this started out as an original fiction idea. I've been trying to write it in various incarnations, but when the Team Teyla AU came up, this just clicked.

So, no, it's not likely that there'll be more. I'm sorry!

[cat_77]

This was beautiful. I love the hints of something more, like an entire universe planned out that we're just getting a glimpse of. Love the elemental references as well. If you decide to continue this, I would love to read it.

[tielan]

Thank you!

Unfortunately, I'm trying to write this universe in an original fic, so it's unlikely that I'll detail anything more about the Atlantis Shadowkin AU in the present time.

[tielan]

Thanks for commenting!

[therisingmoon]

oh team! ♥

[tielan]

:D

[briar_pipe]

Shadowlands! If RPGs were like this, I'd play more often. *g*

I love the complexity of the emotions you draw out here, the way Teyla recognizes and balances the different perspectives in her head. And what a way to rewrite "Sateda"! Charging off in lupine form! *whee!*

(And thankyouthankyou for rescuing us for the 22nd. You're the best!)

[tielan]

Glad you liked it. :)