Mel's Advent Challenge: Star

[teachertam]

Okay, so I haven't done any of the earlier prompts.

And I've NEVER written a drabble before (I thought Brandy's 15 minute challenges were hard!).

And I REALLY needed to be getting ready for work, instead of writing.

But I couldn't resist.  (OOH!  Plus also?  It's EXACTLY 100 words!  I've never done that before!)

So.

Comments

[cheekymice]

Hive brain...we all have a hive brain. :)

[mel39]

That was great. I like that the drabbles aren't all fluffy. A good mix are being produced.

[chazper]

Gah. So much pain--physical and emotional--in just 100 words. This is excellent. (And as far as I'm concerned, angst is always appreciated.)

[oc_gambit2]

Yes, tam, it's dark, but you crammed a lot of emotion into just 100 words. I think it's true to where Ryan came from. A beautiful piece of writing!

[katwoman76]

It's clearly not light, but I like it a lot.
Feels like a typically day in Chino for Ryan. Poor Woobie.