Fic: Le Chat Noir (superstition)

Sep 18, 2009 02:40

I wasn't sure I was quite done with this fic, but then a stray black cat literally crossed my path this evening and I decided it was a sign. After all, this week's all about superstitions, right?

Title: Le Chat Noir
Author: Sarah K
Proslib: yes
Circuit Archive: yes
Pairing and/or characters: early Bodie/Doyle
Rating: Everyone
Warnings: None needed ( Read more... )

genre: pre-relationship, challenges: weekly obbo, rating: everyone, pairing: bodie/doyle, fiction

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kiwisue September 18 2009, 09:09:50 UTC
Two things:-

Firstly, this was a perfect short fic for a Friday after a horrible week at work. Nice and warm without too much sugar.

Secondly, I love your writing style here. It's very clean and uncluttered, but with some lovely images. I particularly liked:

she was purring like a Harley Davidson on the sofa between them

*g*

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tears_of_nienna September 19 2009, 05:25:10 UTC
Thank you! I was wkind of proud of the Harley Davidson bit. ;) You know she was playing chaperon there, making sure they kept their hands to themselves. Well, when they weren't petting her, of course...

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scherwood September 18 2009, 09:13:16 UTC

aww~ Me love it! :D
A perfect going away fic, now I'm all happy.
Thanx~! *hugs*

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tears_of_nienna September 19 2009, 05:25:42 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope you have a good trip, wherever it is you're going! :)

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heliophile_oxon September 18 2009, 10:51:35 UTC
Thank you so much for cheering up the day - much appreciated! That cat is going to be so spoiled *g* (tin of tuna indeed!) Mind you, he might have a tin of tuna - don't suppose he thought to get catfood :)

I especially love the way they both shamelessly used the "don't wake the cat" excuse ... looks like some good luck for all three of them *g*

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tears_of_nienna September 19 2009, 05:27:12 UTC
If Doyle buys cat food, he's going to have to admit to himself that he really wants to keep the cat. Moreover, he's going to have to admit that to Bodie. ;)

Thank you so much! And yes, it does seem like there might be a bit of good luck in store...

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saintvic September 18 2009, 11:20:46 UTC
Oh this was lovely. It has a really nice, gentle, warm, feel to it which just gives us this picture of how they belong together. Oh and I agree you can't wake the cat, we are there to serve them after all *g*. Thank you.

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tears_of_nienna September 19 2009, 05:29:26 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Oh yes, the lads are definitely slaves to the cat...they just don't know it yet. :)

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gilda_elise September 18 2009, 11:55:45 UTC
Oh, nice! Short and sweet, yet with everything I need in a story. Thanks for posting!

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tears_of_nienna September 19 2009, 05:31:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Short and (hopefully) sweet is pretty much my modus operandi, so I'm happy that it felt complete to you! :)

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