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margaret_r in teaandswissroll

Pro's Challenge Obbo 336: Shadows

Mar 08, 2018 15:41

Title: Shadows on the Wall
Author: Margaret_r/Fictionwriter ( Read more... )

Comments 25

firlefanzine March 8 2018, 06:59:46 UTC

Hehe! This is very nice! A very positive approach to the prompt 'shadows'. :-)

"Doyle felt a shiver down his spine and settled closer to the broad shoulder, waiting for the next delight"

You gave me my first smile this morning!
Thank you!

margaret_r March 8 2018, 23:41:54 UTC

You're welcome! I'm very pleased it made you smile and you enjoyed it:)

cim3745 March 8 2018, 10:43:55 UTC

Such a nice story and very well written. Thanks a lot.

margaret_r March 8 2018, 23:46:03 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it:)

msmoat March 8 2018, 13:47:50 UTC

Oh, very nice and atmospheric with only a few words. Thank you! I can totally see this happening. *g*

margaret_r March 9 2018, 00:25:47 UTC

I'm pleased you enjoyed it and it worked for you:) Thanks for reading and such a nice comment!

sc_fossil March 8 2018, 15:44:35 UTC

How wonderful. I love that the lads can enjoy a bit of quiet time and simple things together Nice!

margaret_r March 9 2018, 00:27:49 UTC

Thank you! The lads relaxing together is one of my favourite things to read, or write:) Glad you enjoyed.

macklingirl March 8 2018, 20:29:21 UTC

Wow! That's great. I could really see the shadows on the wall and feel the atmosphere. Wonderful done!

margaret_r March 9 2018, 00:29:28 UTC

Thank you for reading and the lovely comment! I'm very glad you enjoyed it;)