Round One Prompt Post
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Welcome to 'Round One' of The Dark Knight Rises Kink Meme.
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Welcome to 'Round One' of The Dark Knight Rises Kink Meme.
This round will close when it reaches three thousand comments and after two weeks, another prompt post will open.
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She'd push him onto his back and pin him to the bed, sink down onto his cock with a wanton moan and tell him how amazing it was. Tell him what a big, beautiful cock he has and how it's the only thing he's good for. She never let him finish until she had orgasmed at least twice.
Over the months, Talia realized that there were no limits. Bane loved her unconditionally and truly would do anything for her. It frightened her a little, having that kind of power over another person, but it felt far too good to stop. Bane belonged to her in every way, and she wasn't going to give him up for anything. So she convinced her father to let him stay on as her personal bodyguard. A little demeaning, perhaps, but that didn't bother her.
Talia celebrated her nineteenth birthday with a riding crop and wore herself out so completely that she fell fast asleep seconds after release. She awoke sometime in the night to find Bane gone as usual, not wanting to be discovered there by her father. There was a small box and a note from Bane on the pillow next to her. Forgot to give this to you last year. Happy Birthday.
She untied the ribbon and opened the box, her eyes filling quickly with tears at what she saw. It was her mother's necklace, the one she remembered so vividly being ripped off of her mother's neck before she was thrown to the ground and raped. Talia lifted it out of the box with a shaking hand. Why had Bane kept this from her? Did he think it would upset her? And if so, why is he giving it to her now? Is this his way of getting back at her?
Talia gritted her teeth and put the necklace on, her mind buzzing and burning with questions. She lay awake for hours, thinking of new ways to punish Bane.
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Oh my God, Talia is just so perfectly cruel. The build up as she began to realize what she wanted and tried to tease him into giving it to her? Happy sighs!
It killed me that she made him take his mask off to go down on her. I had wondered if he’d be able to perform cunnilingus at all and then you delivered it so amazingly and believably! I can imagine how desperate it might make him to have her orgasm so he could put his mask back on, all the while filled with guilt for wanting to stop pleasuring the woman who was going to bring about a change to the world.
And then…this line “Tell him what a big, beautiful cock he has and how it's the only thing he's good for.” was just perfect! A beautiful, powerful woman objectifying and demeaning an equally powerful man…who just so happens to be helplessly in love with her.
The whole thing is amazing! <3
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Let me hold you. Let me hold and comfort your gorgeously huge abs, and beautiful eyes. It's okay, pumpkin.
Wow, at this fic. There's so much angst and confusion and hurt and cruelty. I'm not usually into non-slash stories and it did hurt me how she was treating him but this was amazing! You're really good. Admittedly I just skimmed over this at first but I hope I get to see more of your stuff.
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I have trouble looking past the flaws in my writing so I really appreciate the feedback.
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