Comments | tbc100: Dead; Rated PG-13

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Dead; Rated PG-13

Dec 12, 2007 01:57

Title: Dead
Author: twbasketcase
Word count: 100
Prompt: Eyes
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/genres: Angst
Summary/Author's notes: From Claire’s POV. Takes place some time after the detention.

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The way he moves is so blunt. Every action he makes is louder than his words; words that are so often taunting and laughing. At ( Read more... )

character: claire, genre: angst, author: twbasketcase, character: john, prompt: eyes, rating: pg-13

Comments 5

tailoredshirt December 12 2007, 07:09:26 UTC

Wow, you wrote Claire! I don't know if I'm more shocked or proud. :)

I love the line about how she got close, if only for a few minutes. I can see them having this temporary intimacy that's real while they have it and then goes away. Like the whole club, actually. Anyway, nice drabble! See, that wasn't so painful, was it? :p

twbasketcase December 12 2007, 07:13:05 UTC

*dies* I know, I even shock myself :P

Yay, I'm glad! See I think if anyone those two would have difficulty adjusting to any sort of life with each other after detention, and I think those few moments in the closet were probably about as intimate as they'd get (at least in my anti shipper eyes, they would XD). But yeah, I'm glad you spotted that :D

It wasn't so bad, I admit XD. I will make it a habit to at least try them all :D

Thanks!

shrimpmeister December 16 2007, 21:26:45 UTC

Cool.....

What strikes me is how a simple movie, with so few actors, can say so much to so many people. Claire's POV isn't one I've thought about too much before now - loved the insight this will give me for the next time I watch the dvd!

twbasketcase December 16 2007, 21:36:39 UTC

Thanks!

I know exactly what you mean. And it can be interpreted so many different ways too. I think that's one of the things I like about it most :)

Claire, in my opinion, is probably one of the most difficult characters to pull off in this fandom. She's got a lot of different layers and she can be rather complicated at times. :) I like that about her!

nova33 December 24 2007, 16:37:38 UTC

Aw, you wrote Claire! I like this a lot (more than I thought I would, simply based on the fact that it was Claire POV) and it just seems so spot on to me. Your description of John, and then the truth. What a good drabble. (I told you could do this drabble thing.)