Okay well first off, you know how much I adore your Lex in a general sense. But to be specific, I really like how you balance caution with curiosity in him, and I'm looking forward to MORE LEX. Especially plotty shenanigans. ♥
Also BLEH, I left out half of what I wanted to say about Lex (ffff brainmush), but BASICALLY. Although I haven't had much contact with him in Taxon I know your Lex very well from museboxes and I can say that he is amazing. He's smart and ambitious but he's also vulnerable too, and you really show how he's a good man put on a bad path. I look forward to seeing you bring out all the subtle layers here in Taxon.
Dan is lovely, I think you have his mild awkwardness and his just basic "nice guy" thing down really well, but he isn't just that, you give him nuances that suggest more. I'd love to see him do something badass in Taxon sometime, to show that side of him. And I adore his interactions with Rorschach especially
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I'm largely unfamiliar with Watchmen outside of what googlefu tells me, so I can't comment on Dan. I can, however, comment on your other two. It's been a long time since I watched Smallville, especially the earlier seasons, but I think you've got a great grasp on his voice. And Jason, oh man your Jason. He continues to amaze me with how much you pay attention to Jason's core - how he aims to do good, cares deeply for his family, etc. - while not ignoring his more derpy traits without letting that drown out the other elements of his characterization. I absolutely love your take on him.
I'm going to skip over Lex, since I'm familiar with the character only in the broadest sense. (Well, and I know HE'S NOT TO BE ALLOWED NEAR CAKES.)
As you're aware, I don't know Jason's canon, but I love how effortlessly you convey how good-natured he is--he may not be a hero in the dramatic, must-save-everyone way, but his eagerness to help people (even if it's just by setting them at ease) comes across in all his tags. I don't really have much in the way of crit--you've done a good job of having him interact with a variety of people, which is nice because you can explore sides of his personality other than "doofus." And I love that he and Loki are rooming together! I think that's just perfect. Oh, and thumbs up on not equating "not the brightest bulb in the box" with "entirely devoid of common sense."
Daaaaaaan--he's still pretty new, but I like what I've seen and I look forward to reading more from our burgeoning Watchmen cast. The one thing I'd like to see is him starting to take notice of or put together all the alternate
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YOUR DANNNNN <3 I cannot express how much I LUFF HIM. I have never had the opportunity to play with another Dan (apparently the Dan-appreciation levels are low, and this saddens me), but I cannot possibly contemplate playing with any other one now. Evenifyouareslowwithtagssometimes. RLishard. IforgiveyouDarwin. His sweaters. His nerd-dom. His owl love. His complete and utter average-ness. THE NOT-QUITE-BROMANCE. You do them all, and do them awesomely. I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE PLOTZ IN THE FUTURE.
I wish I had things to say about Lex. Alas, I know next to nothing about him aside from the obvious and haven't played with him/stalked his threads in game, soooo I have no comments at all. Sorry. :/ I plan to fix this soonish though! Same with Jason, although you have my undying love for having picked him up. XD
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Sob, please be gentle. I never do these. /hides
I know I need to tag more plus I'm still on my slowatus so I'll get to this... slowly.
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Also BLEH, I left out half of what I wanted to say about Lex (ffff brainmush), but BASICALLY. Although I haven't had much contact with him in Taxon I know your Lex very well from museboxes and I can say that he is amazing. He's smart and ambitious but he's also vulnerable too, and you really show how he's a good man put on a bad path. I look forward to seeing you bring out all the subtle layers here in Taxon.
Dan is lovely, I think you have his mild awkwardness and his just basic "nice guy" thing down really well, but he isn't just that, you give him nuances that suggest more. I'd love to see him do something badass in Taxon sometime, to show that side of him. And I adore his interactions with Rorschach especially ( ... )
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IN SHORT YOU'RE DOING FABULOUS, KEEP IT UP. ♥
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As you're aware, I don't know Jason's canon, but I love how effortlessly you convey how good-natured he is--he may not be a hero in the dramatic, must-save-everyone way, but his eagerness to help people (even if it's just by setting them at ease) comes across in all his tags. I don't really have much in the way of crit--you've done a good job of having him interact with a variety of people, which is nice because you can explore sides of his personality other than "doofus." And I love that he and Loki are rooming together! I think that's just perfect. Oh, and thumbs up on not equating "not the brightest bulb in the box" with "entirely devoid of common sense."
Daaaaaaan--he's still pretty new, but I like what I've seen and I look forward to reading more from our burgeoning Watchmen cast. The one thing I'd like to see is him starting to take notice of or put together all the alternate ( ... )
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I wish I had things to say about Lex. Alas, I know next to nothing about him aside from the obvious and haven't played with him/stalked his threads in game, soooo I have no comments at all. Sorry. :/ I plan to fix this soonish though! Same with Jason, although you have my undying love for having picked him up. XD
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