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mikinyan September 10 2015, 20:02:46 UTC
Ok... I tried to read this at... 3am... because it's Ryokura... and YokoHina... and the love is in the air (? SO... I'm gonna read it once again and a leave a not-so-little comment here xD

“which of the members would you kiss if you had no choice but to kiss one of them?”
Tatsu's answer was so mean... He had the chance to get a kiss (...maybe not just a kiss) from Ryo-chan in ExE con, but NOOOOOOOO~ ¬¬ I hate him (?

"At least I HAD some consideration for him"
Poor, Maru xD I know Sho-chan choose him because he love him (yeah, I also supports MaruYasu xD)

"Being a bitch?"
Please, Tatsu, you arrrrrre xDDDD

"- Sorry if you did not say my name either - Shingo said.
Yoko turned abruptly, annoyance winning over Shingo's clear show of jealously.
- Are you saying it's my fault now?!"
That made me wants to know who wrote what in the first place xD

"- ... I have no other choice but to manage life with you the best I can"
That was so sweet *_____*

"Subaru suddenly grabbed Maru's collar, who squealed in the same moment Shota did"
What's Maru? A pet? xD hahahahahaa!

"- I don't like seeing my man kissing another one - Shota coldly said, furrowing"
I can imagine Sho-chan saying that line :P

"- Listen, if it's a male threesome you're proposing, I'm sorry I am not that kind of-"
Why not, Baru? :(

I love the three parts of the oneshot :) and you made me write one about it (I mean, about the kiss issue xD)

Thanks for writing ^3^~ ♥

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lalois September 10 2015, 21:29:19 UTC
Kiss issue!! Kiss issue!!! We want more about kiss issues, please write that fic *O*!!!
I would like to read all your work in Spanish also ç_ç
Thanks for reading <3
I started out with RyOhkura but the funniest part was with Yasuba + Maru in the end, which is curious because I had decided to stop after YokoHina XD
And then, I don't know, I wanted it to be a pure All Eito Love and try to challenge myself with Yasuba and Maru, which incidentally are also the characters I am least comfortable with (as for what writing is concerned).
And it was funny imagining the jealous Subaru and the jealous Shota and the poor Maru trapped within a couple who both voted for him in the Kiss Issue... I love them all <3 <3 <3

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mikinyan September 11 2015, 17:55:36 UTC
I already did it xD I think it was the oneshot that I faster wrote in my entire life xD (damn Ryokura... I had to finish a MaruYasu instead to write that!)
Really? In Spanish? It'll be a honour~ ♥ *^* I post all the stuff I write here: http://yokubouno-rain.livejournal.com/ ^u^

I love to read what you write ^-^

Now you mention that, Ryo-chan and Tatsu were also in the same place? xD

It's awful not be able to write something you want u.u but it didn't seem that :) it was funny xD

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lalois September 22 2015, 21:48:38 UTC
Sorry for the late reply, this September is tough on me T_T
Sorry, I also explained myself so bad: I meant I wish I could read your fic in Spanish, but unfortunately I cannot read Spanish so I am mourning in a corner because I cannot read all the fics that you write T_T

About this story, yeah, Ryochan and Tatsu were also in the same place but their chapter takes place in a different moment, so that they're free and alone when they end up making out ;3

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mikinyan September 23 2015, 18:02:13 UTC
No problem :) I don't wait that you reply immediately ^u^
*reads the reply again* No, you're right xDU I misunderstood your words :P I wrote just one fic in English... and it had a lot of mistakes so I didn't want to write in that language again xD (specially because I make a "translation" of the original fic wrote in Spanish, which it's wroooo~ooong xD)

Ohhh~ I see -w- hehe~

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