Comments | tattooedsiren: Afternoon Promise

tattooedsiren

Afternoon Promise

Jul 28, 2007 09:55

Title: Afternoon Promise
Ships: None.
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Say it with me now ~ me ... don't ... own.
Spoilers: DH ( Summary and AN behind the cut )

harry, gen, hpfic

Comments 29

mrsquizzical July 28 2007, 00:17:26 UTC

i'm such a sap for this stuff!

*loves the image of harry with a baby in his arms*

tattooedsiren July 28 2007, 02:01:03 UTC

Wouldnt he just be adorable! :O)

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tattooedsiren July 28 2007, 02:02:22 UTC

Thanks so much. :O)

deadrana July 28 2007, 00:44:09 UTC

That was absolutely beautiful and everything I hope Harry would say to baby Teddy. It brings lovely images of the future they will have together <3
Just one thing I noticed:
"Silence reigned for a few moments, Harry staring at nothing, barely aware of the fact that teddy still had not let go of his finger."
Capitalize the 't' on Teddy?
Gorgeous!

tattooedsiren July 28 2007, 02:04:35 UTC

Thankyou very much. Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for picking up the type - appreciate it. :O)

Also, your icon rocks.

deadrana July 28 2007, 02:52:36 UTC

*snicker* I think so :)

letmypidgeonsgo July 28 2007, 01:09:37 UTC

*sobs hysterically*

damn you

tattooedsiren July 28 2007, 02:06:26 UTC

*hugs*

pghpatronus July 28 2007, 01:49:33 UTC

That's perfect. I can see Harry reacting in just this way. He'll love Teddy as he does his own kids.

tattooedsiren July 28 2007, 02:08:26 UTC

Thanks so much. Harry will be an awesome godfather.