Bordello: Chapter Eleven

[taste_the_syn]

Title: Bordello
Pairing: Matt/Brian
Rating: M
Summary: Brian is a prostitute, Matt is a man who's intentions weren't to fall for the beautiful man.
Disclaimer: These lovely men own themselves, the plot comes from me though.
Author's note: This chapter took way too long to update, I know, I'm so sorry. But school started and I haven't had the time to

Comments

[zeevee_ocd]

Before I tell you how much I loved this chapter, I have a bit of concrit. It was when Brian left to go sit in a lawn chair to talk to Matt. When Matt told Brian the contract wasn't legit, it said Brian jumped up from his bed.

I thought he was on a lawn chair?

But other than that, this chapter was great. Caden better not try and come after Brian. But I know he is, I mean, the man is crazy. Matt is there for Bri though, which means if Caden tries anything, there will be ass kicking.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Although I know how much school gets in the way of writing, so I'll wait as long as the next update will take.<3

[taste_the_syn]

Crap! aha, I gotta go fix that!
Thanks for reading!

[taste_the_syn]

Fixed it! Thanks for pointing that out! I guess I kept picturing Brian in his room when I was writing it! Haha.

[zeevee_ocd]

No problem, happens to everyone. Especially if Brian is on your mind. ;)

If you need a beta (even though your writing hardly ever has mistakes), I'll be glad to help. :) just message me and I'll give you my e-mail.

[taste_the_syn]

Sounds good :D

[zeevee_ocd]

Okay. My e-mail is: ysaucedo91@gmail.com.

Glad to help! Especially with this story, I love it. :)

[taste_the_syn]

:D Thanks.
I'd be glad to have your help on the next chapter, it would be nice to have someone go over it for me.

[zeevee_ocd]

Yeah, no problem. :) It's hard to find mistakes when it comes to revising your own work, since you become accustomed with it.

Besides, it's like I get a sneak peek. Beta-ing for one of my favorite stories is more of an honor than anything. :D

[taste_the_syn]

Haha, well I'm glad you feel that way. I'll be sure to email you when I've got it done. (:

[taste_the_syn]

Well I sent the email, if you could check it out and get it done as soon as possible that would be great :D

[zeevee_ocd]

Okay, read it. Since I start school soon and everything is a bit hectic, I think I should have it ready by...Tuesday. Is that good? I don't wanna be a shitty beta.

[taste_the_syn]

That's good :)

[zeevee_ocd]

Okay. :D I'll try my absolute best to have it ready for ya.

[taste_the_syn]

Thank you (: It means a lot.