Comments | tasogaretaichou: First Kiss

tasogaretaichou

First Kiss

Apr 29, 2007 20:54

Alright so here goes with my first theme from 30_kisses. I picked NejiHina as my pairing, and this is the first theme, "perfect blue"

Title: Perfect Blue
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: NejiHina
Theme: perfect blue, for 30_kisses
Rating/Warnings: PGish

( Perfect Blue )

Comments 5

icarus_suraki April 30 2007, 02:24:05 UTC

That's so sweet~♥
And, yay, you got it done.

(btw: got my POLY app all done--hopefully they'll like it even if it's long, uhm... But i won't know until May 3rd? WTF?! ;_; )

Great as.. rockleelover93 April 30 2007, 02:56:48 UTC

Great as a cookies and cream ice cream cone! The depth of blue is like the background of your journal. Neko-chan like always writes great!

individual April 30 2007, 23:44:33 UTC

I love it, it's so adorable.

And babies! ♥~~ You get extra points for that. Awesome job, added it to my memories. ♥

tasogaretaichou May 1 2007, 00:03:50 UTC

Thanks.

And yes, babies. I do so many RP and writing storylines with them that they have like 8 sets of babies, and I just decide which one I want to use where. XD

Love your sensitivity anonymous May 26 2007, 14:02:27 UTC

I love your sensitivity. This is the would-be Neji in future if Hinata marries him. The sentimental thoughts beneath our hero's stoic appearance is so well written here. I find it a bit of pity that your NejixHina stories don't have a parallel time line. Here Neji and Hinata are already married for a while and he has just joined ANBU. In your other story ADROS, Neji is already captain of ANBU. Unmarried and apparently detached and no nonsense on the outside, he is also very mature (not to mention quite sexy). If this story had taken place after ADROS, I think it would be a very nice fill-in for us as supporters of NejixHina. Now it feels a bit like your NejixHina stories are stand alones with no connection with one another. Nevertheless, great writing here! Love it very much!