Lady Hawk (Hawaii Five-0)

May 25, 2012 23:24


Title: Lady Hawk
Author: tari_roo
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be, not unless that different trouser leg of time thing kicks in. But if I did... Danny and Steve would banter - alot :)

Summary:  Catherine and Steve go on a long awaited date. Things are going well. This means that something bad is going to happen - it always does. Alas, Poor Catherine - ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic_hawaii_50

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auntmo9 May 25 2012, 23:52:07 UTC
1) I have to agree with Catherine..Ropers are better than Mr. Furely and I am not impressed with the Three Stooges. I have a soft spot for Mrs. Roper, crazy 70s house dress and all.

2) Excellent MacGyver reference!

3) Catherine was still pretty BAMF in her own way--meat tenderizer FTW!

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tari_roo May 26 2012, 10:43:05 UTC
1) Actually I'm with Steve - Mr Furley is my fav. I loved Mrs Roper, but Don Knott's schtick never gets old :)

2) Thanks... very memorable scene for an impressionable girl

3) Scary things those meat tenderisers O.o

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sylvanelfqueen May 26 2012, 00:30:05 UTC
That was great! I love seeing Cath go all BAMF to save Steve ... and with a meat tenderizer. Awesome! I love it!

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tari_roo May 26 2012, 10:48:38 UTC
:) Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the comments

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perspi May 26 2012, 03:22:15 UTC
Oh, wheeeee! That was a great read!

When Danny showed up I have to tell you I was as surprised as Catherine! :-D

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tari_roo May 26 2012, 10:49:06 UTC
Yay for Suprise Danny! :)

And thanks!

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saphirablue May 26 2012, 07:52:09 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥

BAMF!Catherine with a meat tenderizer! \o/

God, I love this! The Cath POV, BAMF!Cath, her humor, her flight, attack and rescue non-plan and her saving Steve! ♥

When you mentioned that Steve was tied to a chair near the pool I was so, so, so hoping that he gets thrown into it. And you did it! \o/ I love this scene! Catherine diving after him, getting his arm free, diving back to him, getting him free, getting him to the surface and to the edge of the pool into saftey - BUTTONS!!!!!

Also - THANK YOU for leaving the high heels in the bathroom! You have no idea how much eyerolling it causes me when heroines are running around in high heels. :)

Danny was such a pleasant surprise and the Cath and Danny bonding? ♥ (and now I want a Cath taking care of a drugged, hurt and rant-y Danny. :P Well, there will be a nex Prompt Fest. *grins*)

Thank you so, so, so much for this! =)

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tari_roo May 26 2012, 11:21:19 UTC
It took a while to figure out the exact practicalities of getting him in the pool - but we managed :)

Considering I nearly fell off my shoes this week while running down the corridor at work... oh yes, you bet the heels got kicked off!

Thanks dear lady! So glad you liked it (and that I finished it)

:)

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saphirablue May 26 2012, 20:40:39 UTC
And I'm very happy for that! :)

Ouch! Yeah, I can't even walk in highheels - I don't want to imagine having to run with them.

You're welcome! :)

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huntress69 May 26 2012, 18:14:50 UTC
I got such a kick out of this - BAMF!Catherine is awesome.

First Catherine wanted to build a homemade chemical bomb or noxious gas but I finally convinced her that the fumes or explosion would hurt her first. The, she wanted Black Widow style moves and to fight five guys at once but I had to explain that such a fight scene was beyond my writing ability.

I understand this totally. I so hate it when the characters do this to me, always with the arguing over what they want to do, never taking the author into consideration.

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tari_roo May 26 2012, 18:22:00 UTC
Well, usually I can keep the characters in line - give Danny some great lines and he's compliant. Let Steve hit a few people, and he pliable. But Catherine... sheesh, first time working together nerves I guess. (and seeing Avengers too many times I suppose)

Thanks ... appreciate the comment :)

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