Like a Poke in the Eye (Hawaii 5-0)

Sep 18, 2011 22:02

Like a Poke in the Eye

Author: Tari_Roo

Rating: PG (Gen)

Disclaimer: I own nothing, I profit from nothing. Although if I had my way Steve would be bare-chested even more than he is, we would actually ‘see’ Danny trying to surf and Kono would be a secret Cylon. That is all.

Summary: Prompt fill for hawaii_50_hc commentfic meme - Danny gets hurt on a case and Steve ( Read more... )

hawaii_50, fanfic, fic_hawaii_50, hurt!danny

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auntmo9 September 18 2011, 20:13:49 UTC
I miss these guys and I enjoy how you write them. Looking forward to the new season with Locke Terry O'Quinn coming aboard for some of the episodes.

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tari_roo September 18 2011, 20:18:24 UTC
*gah!* my eyes, spoilers, spoilers!

But now I'm excited too! Oooo... Lost and H_50 crossovers... oooooo

Thanks m'dear. I just hope the writing juices start flowing, because... took far longer than it should have to knock out 1k plus ;)

Thanks again

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auntmo9 September 18 2011, 20:31:11 UTC
Well, I won't tell you what he I have heard is doing...but I have always like Terry O'Quinn as an actor, so whatever he brings to the table, I am sure it will be delightful

And yes, with Terry O'Quinn and Daniel Dae Kim, plenty of Lost crossover opportunities.

Now, if there were just away to figure out a way to do that BSG crossover w/Kono *ponders*

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tari_roo September 18 2011, 20:35:56 UTC
Argh, don't go there. I've been wracking my brain in odd moments wondering if a feasible BSG/H_50 crossover is possible without some serious reality warping.

But I'm sure it could be done as an AU maybe with the h-50 team as intergalatic earth cops who meet the Fleet as the approach Earth (and AU the ending of BSG) and when everyone on board Galactica freaks out about Kono... rats... now I want to read that!

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saphirablue September 18 2011, 20:15:55 UTC
Awesome!

Your first Kono POV? Kono shook her head, “Nope, but the Boss is about to implode.” Bawahahahah! *wipes tears* Awesome!

I love the nurse standing up to Steve and not giving in and being able to resist the death glare. :)

Thank you! :)

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tari_roo September 18 2011, 20:19:53 UTC
You are, of course, most welcome.

Angry!Steve amuses me (and Kono) no end, I think. He's scary, but you giggle anyway (out of nerves)

Thanks a million!

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dante_s_hell September 18 2011, 20:16:52 UTC
Oh wow! This is one of the best stories I've read in this fandom! I love your Steve. I wish he'd lose his shit more where Danny is concerned. And Chin and Kono? Awesome!

Love lethal, deadly Steve.

I can't gush enough about this story. I'm so glad you wrote it. Definitely going into my mems!

Thank you!

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tari_roo September 18 2011, 20:26:41 UTC
Gosh, thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it :) Steve losing his shit is so much fun to watch :)

Appreciate the feedback - no really!

thanks again.

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doc_3 September 18 2011, 20:59:13 UTC
LOVE IT. I can just see this playing out onscreen, and fantastic use of the 'losing his shit' line. Kono and Chin were dead in character as well, and Chin makes such a great counterpoint to Steve's craziness. Thanks!

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tari_roo September 18 2011, 21:17:49 UTC
Oh, you are most welcome - I'm glad you liked it and that it fit the prompt - 'cos it was a great prompt!

Steve outta control is kinda fun to watch (and write)

thanks again

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tli September 18 2011, 21:16:19 UTC
Loved it! Great character voices all around, and I'm glad the nurse stood his ground, too.

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tari_roo September 18 2011, 21:22:42 UTC
why thank you, glad you enjoyed it ;)

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