[Fic] First love

Nov 17, 2011 05:16


Title: First love
Rating: K+
'Verse: G1 (pre-history)
Characters: Prowl/Jazz
Prompt: "A Jazz/Prowl romance story with some angst and drama but happy ending"

A/N: happy birthday atemue! (usagi_atemu_tom)
First love )

fanfic, transformers, gifts, shortfic

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darksirocco November 16 2011, 18:22:03 UTC
oooh, really like this one! hopehopehope there's more!
*sends cookies and chocolate and bonbons(always bonbons!) and carrots..erm...energon...uhm ...carrogons!!!(carrot-shaped energon cookies)*
but, bleaurgh..just thinking of all those slimy little bunnies, waving their tentacles around..oh. nm. i can has tentacle-bunny?? =^.^=

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taralynden November 17 2011, 02:57:52 UTC
Stop feeding those bunnies! Especially with carrogons! (they certainly sound yummy!)

"i can has tentacle-bunny" - you can have the whole lot of them! Well the ones I haven't already given away, at least. At the speed they breed, though, I'm not sure I'll ever be free of them... *whimpers*

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darksirocco November 17 2011, 04:30:56 UTC
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *sendsbunnies a magic cloning machine* there. i fixed it. *grins wickedly*

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taralynden November 17 2011, 06:28:24 UTC
*crosses arms and glares* Now look here. Do you want tomorrow's chapter of SoaL up on time or not?

*bunny nibbles on SoaL script* No! Bad bunny. No Quintessons in this story! I'll tell Meister!muse...

There. That scared them off for a bit.

(please, please stop feeding/cloning the bunnies!)

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femme4jack November 16 2011, 21:59:53 UTC
oh nonononono, you must write MORE of this beautiful thing. Those Masters have no idea what they just unlocked!

This.... this is a wonderful, delicious bunny. I love stories that place the characters we know in Quintesson times. Well done, TL!

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taralynden November 17 2011, 03:02:08 UTC
Must I? Really? But... but... they're distracting me from so many other things that I've been promising to finish for ages... like the prequel to Obsessed, and the half-written one where the twins end up being officers (temporarily) and the very very late response to the September pxj challenge where one of the prompts bit hard but I had too much else on to get it done...

You want me to put all those aside for this?

(Yes, yes, unfair question, I know, I know...)

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully atemue will too (she's holding off until it's really her birthday, since it's the 17th here a lot earlier than where she is - I'm impressed by her self control!)

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fianna9 November 17 2011, 00:41:40 UTC
Interesting concept for the development of spark bonds. I can easily see this (especially the attempt to separate pairs) causing the massive rebellion. Great idea.

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taralynden November 17 2011, 03:04:00 UTC
Oh indeed. Now that the possibility is known it can never again be not known. The Quintessons have sown the seeds of their own downfall here :)

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bluebirdsoaring November 17 2011, 05:30:31 UTC
I think its so creative...even after enjoying your other verse so much, to see them in a totally other verse due to the Quints and to be forced into bonding...wow!! I love this on a whole other level =) What a fun start...and it is a start I hope =) *willing to bribe the bunnies too!!* I'm not a fan of Quints, but I'd love to see how their whole world comes undone after forcing two bots to bond and how they discovered a forbidden thing like love. That is a perfect story in the making!!!

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taralynden November 17 2011, 06:24:13 UTC
Thanks ^_^ It's set in one of my two favoured origin stories for the Cybertronians. I'm not sure which I prefer better, but the idea of the first bond being caused by the Quintessons themselves was too good to ignore.

What is it with all you people feeding my bunnies?! Can't you just adopt them? ;)

Nah, I'm not a fan of the Quints either, but they make wonderful villains :D

"That is a perfect story in the making!!!" *blinks* *looks at loooong list of WIPs* *sighs* Wanna write it? I don't think I have time.

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jarakrisafis November 17 2011, 17:40:38 UTC
*sneaks in and drops off a couple more mutated, red optic'd bunnies*
...Many years in the future, they will be teaching newly created Cybertronians that it was a pair of mechs, designated Jazz and Prowl that started the revolution...

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taralynden November 18 2011, 04:32:40 UTC
What is it with you people giving me bunnies! I'm having trouble getting to the computer through them all!

:) Go far enough into the future and they become mythical rather than legendary...

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jarakrisafis November 18 2011, 17:39:21 UTC
Whistles innocently.* Well I don't want them! I have enough of my own breeding and you corral them into fics so well it makes sense for you to have them all.

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