Yay! What a welcome home.... Although you can already see the potential tensions forming with Prowl having company and his friendship with Sideswipe, while Jazz is being recalled to his duty.
Missed him lots.
And Prowl? You don't get off that easily. Just because you were (once again) absorbing yourself in work to forget doesn't mean that certain issues go away.
I loved this update. It is funny, sexy and entertaining. Poor Sideswipe, he had to feel so awkward! And will he question Prowl about the party business that he heard?
Jazz's reaction was exactly as you'd expect. I really like that you've given your Jazz an edge to him, the reader knows he has a dangerous side you dont want to be on the receiving end of. A lot of writers I think make Jazz too soft, dont give him enough depth, but I love your Jazz, I'm glad he's back for now :3
I bet Prowl is happy too! :D
Excellent update, can't wait until the next one. *curls up under blanket to eagerly wait*
Yes, poor poor Sideswipe keeps ending up in awkward situations around Prowl. Will he ask? Maybe. Between work and Jazz, Prowl's going to be quite busy...
Thanks. :) Some people do go the 'easy going, fun loving' way, and that's fine so long as you ignore the part of his canon profile that says he's a saboteur. Which is not to say that this Jazz is the only way he can be, far from it, but this is the way he wanted to be written for this fic: neuroses, depressive tendencies and all!
Prowl is most *definitely* happy Jazz is back. And is looking forward to making certain his partner knows it. :D
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December 2 2010, 22:49:47 UTC
Great chapter.
Prowl may think that his problems have disappeared, but he is going to have to deal with it at some point. Something tells me it won't just go away permanently. I wonder if Jazz is going to notice a change in Prowl's spark.
Prowl seems to thrive on multi-tasking. I'm glad to see Hoist again, especially with Prowl's trust in him. As for the Ark, if this is Prowl's definition of under control, I'd hate to see chaos. I love the bit with Sideswipe and the still. Knowing Prowl, he probably knew about the still earlier and let Sideswipe experiment to speed up the process.
I'm sorry to see Sunstreaker go off on his own, but he probably is a little uncomfortable around Prowl now. Are we going to find out who he's seeing?
Yeah! We get Jazz back...at least for a little while right? Poor Sideswipe almost got killed by Jazz. Never startle the special ops mech, especially while being intimate with his lover. Jazz is a little possessive of Prowl isn't he? Curveball is going to be annoyed that Jazz delayed to see Prowl.
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Problems ignored have a nasty tendency to crop up when you least expect - no, Prowl's not entirely done with what's gone on here, though he's happy enough to pretend it's all over. Will Jazz notice anything? We'll have to see.
Prowl is the epitome of a multi-tasker, only happy when he's got five deadlines due in the next hour and a handful of crises that should have been avoided thrown in for good measure. *lol* Well, the Escaphalion probably wouldn't run the same without him, that's for sure! (And yes, I think you're right - he's taking advantage of Camber's lessons, and even being sneaky about it
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I'm so glad Jazz is back... or is he? It really sounds like he's in one of his "on board now but taking off in the next breem" modes right now. And if his Darkmount job is really finished, then things are about to get dangerous for someone (Jazz for sure, Sideswipe and Sunstreaker are also likely
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Yes, he's definitely back. And he'll be around for most of the time from now on, only disappearing for a chapter or two at a time, at most. Which is not to say that *he* knows it's going to be that stable...
Don't worry, we'll find out who Sunny's seeing. It'll be either chapter 3 or 4, I think.
You're right that there will be repercussions in the future. What those will be, we'll have to wait and see. For now, Prowl feels fairly well balanced and rather pleased that his partner is finally back.
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Missed him lots.
And Prowl? You don't get off that easily. Just because you were (once again) absorbing yourself in work to forget doesn't mean that certain issues go away.
Whirlwind, who missed Jazz and is glad he's back.
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Told you I'd bring him back soon :)
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Jazz's reaction was exactly as you'd expect. I really like that you've given your Jazz an edge to him, the reader knows he has a dangerous side you dont want to be on the receiving end of. A lot of writers I think make Jazz too soft, dont give him enough depth, but I love your Jazz, I'm glad he's back for now :3
I bet Prowl is happy too! :D
Excellent update, can't wait until the next one. *curls up under blanket to eagerly wait*
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Thanks. :) Some people do go the 'easy going, fun loving' way, and that's fine so long as you ignore the part of his canon profile that says he's a saboteur. Which is not to say that this Jazz is the only way he can be, far from it, but this is the way he wanted to be written for this fic: neuroses, depressive tendencies and all!
Prowl is most *definitely* happy Jazz is back. And is looking forward to making certain his partner knows it. :D
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Prowl may think that his problems have disappeared, but he is going to have to deal with it at some point. Something tells me it won't just go away permanently. I wonder if Jazz is going to notice a change in Prowl's spark.
Prowl seems to thrive on multi-tasking. I'm glad to see Hoist again, especially with Prowl's trust in him. As for the Ark, if this is Prowl's definition of under control, I'd hate to see chaos. I love the bit with Sideswipe and the still. Knowing Prowl, he probably knew about the still earlier and let Sideswipe experiment to speed up the process.
I'm sorry to see Sunstreaker go off on his own, but he probably is a little uncomfortable around Prowl now. Are we going to find out who he's seeing?
Yeah! We get Jazz back...at least for a little while right? Poor Sideswipe almost got killed by Jazz. Never startle the special ops mech, especially while being intimate with his lover. Jazz is a little possessive of Prowl isn't he? Curveball is going to be annoyed that Jazz delayed to see Prowl.
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Prowl is the epitome of a multi-tasker, only happy when he's got five deadlines due in the next hour and a handful of crises that should have been avoided thrown in for good measure. *lol* Well, the Escaphalion probably wouldn't run the same without him, that's for sure! (And yes, I think you're right - he's taking advantage of Camber's lessons, and even being sneaky about it ( ... )
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(And quicker to type, too!)
Have a good week. ^_^
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Don't worry, we'll find out who Sunny's seeing. It'll be either chapter 3 or 4, I think.
You're right that there will be repercussions in the future. What those will be, we'll have to wait and see. For now, Prowl feels fairly well balanced and rather pleased that his partner is finally back.
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