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bktheirregular November 3 2003, 21:56:09 UTC
Sweet! Very very nice, even if I haven't seen the episode ... and it's making me want to dig up the already-aired episodes from somewhere and get the feel for Jake and Diane (almost said Jack and Diane - got Mellencamp on the brain...)

Brava!

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xanphibian November 3 2003, 22:48:04 UTC
Eeeee! It's perfect! It fits so well into canon, and Diane is so adorably spot on, and Jake is just ... eeee!

I love it. :)

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bunglegirl November 4 2003, 07:05:58 UTC
The parts you added with Jake's feelings about Diane's reasons for coming totally help! Tomorrow night should be good.

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taraljc November 4 2003, 07:36:56 UTC
*squeeee!* in anticipation...

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liquidize November 6 2003, 17:12:55 UTC
*eeee* Yay! I so see that scene happening -- I can't see Diane not telling him about Antonio. I love their babbly friendship/awkwardness! Your dialogue is so spot on.

*grins* "greecepaint and pleather" = naughty thoughts;)

All in all, lovely, lovely stuff!!!

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