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[tarahkins16]

so i started writing a new song...
the way it sounds is like.. a punk/hardcoreish..
kind of like afi..

im not done.. i just want to know what you guys think so far..

title: CHOKE, BREATHE, BURN, DIE

CHOKE, BREATHE, BURN, DIE!
CHOKE, BREATHE, BURN, DIE!

CHOKE! let all of it go
BREATHE! leall of us know
BURN! show me the way
DIE! you'll have no say!

CHOKE! give it up now
BREATH! show me how
BURN! tell your lies
DIE! look into my eyes!
CHOKE, BREATHE, BURN, DIE!

CHOKE! play this game
BREATHE! be put to shame
BURN! say no more
DIE! my fucking-heart is sore

CHOKE! get over it
BREATHE! your full of shit
BURN! you'll never win
DIE! just drink your gin
CHOKE, BREATHE, BURN, DIE!

CHOKE! fuck you
BREATHE! and the things you do
BURN! im better than that
DIE! you scumbag rat
CHOKE, BREATHE, BURN, DIE!

so im not done.. but let me know what you think..