Undeserving

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Title: Undeserving
Author: xoxo_nat_xx
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae
Ratings: PG
Genre: Romance, Angst, AU
Summary: How do you determine, if you are worthy for the other, in love?

Song-fiction, based on Jay Chou's song, "I'm not worthy."

Comments

[g_041]

IT'S NOT WRONG.
AND I'M COMMENTING NO?

It's beautiful...
Like how painful this relationship is for the both of them...
And how the media industry can change someone so greatly in just that short period of time...

OFF TO THE SEQUEL!
NOW YOU.
DON'T GO BEING DISCOURAGED OKAY?
XD

[scarlet_ember]

because I think you, of all people, deserve some comments.

One, if not the, most memorable stories are the break-up diaries... those of which tells us that hope is gone, and that nothing, absolutely nothing is right about the relationship anymore.

You took me there, at that stage of emotion where I couldn't help but break my heart for both Hyukkie and Hae, because really, I couldn't seem to take sides. Hyukkie has a point, but Hae has one too.

Then you suddenly give me this scene where one hugs the other so tightly, as much as your story has tugged on my emotions, ending the moment with a single line, Don't go. Don't, just don't. That alone, my dear, sold your story to grade A

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Find the sequel in the masterlist! This one is broken. Lazy to change. XP

[yeongwonnie]

people are either blind or don't have any sense of good taste
how can they not aknowledge the merit of such a good piece of writing?
anyway don't feel discouraged or anything because like marks in school, comments don't reflect the true ability & talent of a person

I've always thought feelings are the most difficult thing to describe yet you managed here to depict their every little emotion
I was afraid they would break up which is so sad because they're still in love & it's nothing but a misunderstanding & a lack of confidence in themselves & in each other
but it's all for the best that Hae is still holding on, he's proving they're worthy of each other

*off to the sequel*