Good morning to you (but good night to me)

Jul 20, 2010 21:24

Title: Good morning to you (but good night to me)
Author: xoxo_nat_xx
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae; Heechul/Eunhyuk
Rating: PG
Summary: It’s about going along with your desires and accomplishing them, because he’s still young. He can afford to be immature, to commit mistakes, and so he waits.

“Glad to know that you are drinking something without caffeine at night over at New York,” Hyukjae states, glancing up at the sunlight beating down on the path in Korea. )

pairing: eunhyuk/heechul!, focus: eunhyuk!~, length: woah it's a one-shot!, genre: romance o.o, rating: pg, pairing: eunhyuk/donghae!, genre: angst o.o

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hyukhae4ever July 20 2010, 13:35:27 UTC
EAT's ^^

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tees2mai July 20 2010, 16:07:42 UTC
CHEERS -knocks invisible glass of whatever with yours-

OH BB, THIS WAS ALL KINDS OF BEAUTIFUL, BECAUSE I'M A SUCKER FOR THIS KIND OF HEARTBREAK. What are you talking about? You still write wonderfully!

I like Heechuls role in this. I love that both Heechul and Eunhyuk can't be selfish enough. I like that Donghae's always looking at the bright side of things. I love that Heechuls the one that brings him back.

“One step at a time,” Donghae is mouthing, and Hyukjae looks, and he nods.

--

3.24am ( ... )

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tees2mai July 20 2010, 16:09:07 UTC
also, i like that you brought in the cats.

I kept thinking about how Eunhyuk would turn into the crazy old cat lady, but then thats Heechuls role <3

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xoxo_nat_xx July 23 2010, 10:15:54 UTC
GUH I WAS SO AFRAID THAT THIS PIECE WAS SUCKY ):

But seriously, looking at the number of comments I get for this fic now, it's really really low, and unlike what I used to get too. I whined to clarissa, and she said everybody forgot who I am, because most of them only remember the new writers these days. I'm discouraged ):

And nobody seems to really understand the meaning of the role of the cats in this fic :S I don't know if my writing is just really confusing and nobody really catches the depth of the fic. Guh, this is discouraging. ):

Okay, let's write beautiful fics together (:

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tees2mai July 23 2010, 11:16:28 UTC
NO IT'S NOT.

;; older generation. those words officially break my heart. i'm not trying to act all that, but lets face it. there used to be some sort of an excitement when you and i and others from our time would post... like a rush of people aiming for spot. now it's either people have forgotten us or don't expect much from us...

...Did i get it wrong then? because i usually associate cat with loneliness or being wise. unless they're like heechuls eyes to keep an eye on eunhyuk for him or something along that line.... :| sorry bb.

Lets. (: i haven't been on my msn in months, do you aim by any chance?

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yes you are an angel fishydotlove July 21 2010, 04:31:59 UTC
BB ILUSMF LIKE SRSLY OMG <3

thank you so much for emailing this me first, it cheered me up right before ndp >.< LOL /is honoured

i'm liking the hyukchul tbh. and i love how you write the cats as hyukchul!
not a really happy ending eunhae, but its still lovely and portrayed the reason why i dont ship kihae so much.
kibum is being a jerk like donghae an idiot and heechul trying to sort things up.
this was so nicely written, thank you for the comeback lol.

Heechul turns over and gives his clock a cursory glance.

3.30am.

He admires his self control to last for 6 minutes. He presses his face into his pillow and lets it get damp.
:'D

tho im not included, cheers to all the hyukhae writers from older generation! :D

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Yeah I know I am one. (: xoxo_nat_xx July 23 2010, 10:20:10 UTC
ILU2!~ And I already know that you love me yay (: i'm happy that it cheered you up, i was a bit apprehensive of this piece and wasn't really sure of it and stuff :S

oh well, donghae was partially at fault for being so indecisive and springing a surprise visit on kibum in new york too; kibum was just being his usual self, silent and not as expressive of his own feelings, and he doesn't really like donghae in that way, so it's kind of one-sided and thus yeah.

YOU ARE IN THE OLDER GENERATION GRRR. You know what I mean by the new generation, and i'm kind of disappointed with the feedback i'm getting these days. I have to constantly remind myself that i'm writing not for the comments, but sometimes it's just hard to encourage oneself to go on further with this. :)

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