Different perspectives

[xoxo_nat_xx]

Title: Different Perspectives
Author: xoxo_nat_xx
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook
Ratings: PG
Summary: A love story, told through the eyes of others.

Comments

[dandanfung]

Ohmygod, you killed me. You killed me. OMG that was the most beautiful piece of writing I have ever read in a long time.

OHmygod you killed me, shit I'm not even being coherent anymore. This was sooo perfectly crafted down to the last detail, and using the third person POV it illustrated their romance WONDERFULLY.

Except... Wookie... T___T *weeps* one of the guy is unconscious, and he’s not responding. The other is just holding on to his hand tightly, not wanting to let go... like the cry for a lost love. You killed me... ohmygod...

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I LOVE YOU FOREVER. <3

[read0write]

omg that's so sweet but but so sad T_T
i love it but i don't like the angst at all T_T makes me so sad now...
so terrible and sweet (i'm sorry my comments are just repeats of this XD)

yewook = total absolute pure love ♥

[g_041]

This is amazing...
How do you write from so many different points of views but in a way they're all seemingly connected somehow?
The woman's intuition, the reporter's instinct, the old newspaper stand owner's (not so) routine day...

And the ending was just sad...
Linking to the very first paragraph - I have to say again, that was amazing.
I was somehow expecting Ryeowook to die from his actions there - but the silent proposal just caught me off-guarded.

Great job! :D

[razi_a]

*sniffs subtlety*

That was so beautiful. I loved the different points of view.

The last scene is so heartbreaking ;____;

♥

[akihikaru]

i already told you that i love your works, right?

♥

I ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ this. ♥♥

and you.♥♥♥

^^ you write so well. XDDDDDDD