Fic : The Memory of Tears

[tanarian5]

Title: THE MEMORY OF TEARS
Characters: Jack, Ianto, Lisa
Pairing: Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa
Rating: PG for implied violence and death
Spoilers: Major for CyberwomenDisclaimer: Not mine; they belong to the BBC

Comments

[space_monkey52]

New story! I absolutely loved this! Everything is so detailed that you can get a clear image of what is happening in the story. I love how you show Jack discovering exactly what Ianto was going through and beginning to get a better understanding of exactly what happened and what Ianto was thinking. I also loved the look into the mind of Lisa Hallet in the end and the moment of her final "death" where she lost what was left of her humanity. Beautifully written as always.

[tanarian]

I was just so pleased that I managed to do some updating! Glad you liked the story. It was a bit difficult to write so I'm really glad it worked.

[love_jackianto]

I'm so glad you're writing TW fic again. What a great story! I love how you capture the emotions of all the characters but Lisa in particular.

[tanarian5]

Inside my own head Lisa was a seriously conflicted person by the time we got to Cyberwoman. I don't think she 'died' at Canary Wharf but I do think she was dead by the end. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[love_jackianto]

'Inside my own head Lisa was a seriously conflicted person by the time we got to Cyberwoman. I don't think she 'died' at Canary Wharf but I do think she was dead by the end.'
Me too. I've always thought that the reason she wanted to convert Ianto was because part of her was still human and she really did want them to be together.

[anonymous]

Wonderful story. Nice view on the 'inside' of Jack's thoughts and ideas. Love to read the rest as well..

[bookwrm89]

I loved Lisa's perspective in this. That's exactly how I imagined it to be - periods where she was aware and Lisa, and blank spots where she had no idea what was happening.

[idamus]

That was seriously heartbreaking