I Feel You (Angel(us)/Spike) R 1/1

[tamibrandt]

Title: I Feel You
By Tami (tabrandt @ hotmail.com)
Disclaimer: The characters from ATS / BTVS are owned by Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, and Fox studios. This story is not meant to infringe upon anyone's rights, only to entertain.
BETA: Myself, lexa4227Rating - R

Comments

[amavel_bel]

Wow, great imagery with Spike and Angel reestablishing their connection. Very well done ;-).

[tamibrandt]

Thank you hun. Glad you liked it. :)

[so_sharlemaine]

Ohmygod! Something for ME??!! Yay!!! I'll be back!

*grabs blankie and snuggles up to read right away*

[tamibrandt]

Yes. I hope you enjoy it.

[so_sharlemaine]

Oh, it's so good, Tami :-) I love it!
...it's intense, passionate, Angel is so dominant, and Spike submits but only after Angel shows him. I love the submission at the end. And the imagery...I could really see it all happening in my mind. Their thoughts...so detailed and true to character.

And you know I love that song.

This is a really nice piece of writing. It's wonderful. Thank you for writing it.

[tamibrandt]

You're welcome. I did have a bit of trouble with Spike in the beginning because he kept analyzing everything Angel did. It ended up being a long roundabout POV piece.

I know you said the song made you think of Angel helping Spike deal with his soul, and I had started the fic with that idea, but I don't think it turned out that way.

As for Angel being dominant and possessive, I can't seem to write my Angel(us) any other way. I guess I turned him into my 'dream guy' that way, Tall, dark, gorgeous, forceful yet caring at the same time, the posssessive streak rising when called for, but not to the point of being a control freak. (things I will never find in one male in Real Life)

[so_sharlemaine]

You could find him...I got lucky and found one like that.
...Well, ok, he's not a vampire, but the rest is there. ;-)

I like that Spike was analyzing...I like getting in their heads and hearing what's going on. And I LOVE your Angel(us).

[tamibrandt]

What did you think of the banner that went with it?

[caelith]

Completely mind-blowing!

The last part got me completely, the mental picture of them biting each other's necks in the throws of passion...*explodes*

[tamibrandt]

Thank you. :)