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[tambaysakanto]

this lj entry will be presenting you two parallelisms. ;;^^

Ang mga hindi totoong kaibigan

ang totoo, ay totoo
ang huwad ay huwad
sa piling ko'y naging salat
dahil sa palabra de honor 
na aking tangitangi; ako sa ere
iyong iniwan pitong taong pinagsamahan
nakain ng halimaw sa ilalim ng iyong kama.

sa aking pagkabaliw siya'y lumisan
dala-dala sa isang

Comments

[hydegyny]

and that is what I would like to call creativity. *clap clap*

^^ hehe kailan kaya ako maaaring dumaan dyan sa may Mandaluyong para mabisita ka anak? hehe

ahem. I knew the parallelisms you were presenting RIGHT AWAY. haha.

[tambaysakanto]

yay!! sankyuu mommiiii miss you *glomps, hugzz* kelan? kahit anong oras basta mga 5 something pag weekdays, pag weekend anytime!
yey! nakuha mo! may you know... ahem. you know na you know that we both know
ahaha

[butterballer]

i suppose my abductee's alibi won't work, yes?
anyway, from what i understood, it was good. the middle was a bit bland (ithinkthisis,basically,arequirementforagoodending).

but

sabi sa sarili huwag pansinin; lagot baka salita ay makain.
was nice.
truly.
unmistakable.

and, about the practice, yes.
we all do. :)

[tambaysakanto]

thanks for the review! its very much appreciated! yes?

[tambaysakanto]

talaga! wee! salamat!! ahaha siguro surgeof emotions lang ng time nito and inspired talaga me.. thank you talaga! meands a lot to me *hugzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*