The painting.

Feb 14, 2008 17:25

I don't think it's a good enough representation, but it's the best I have. It's still not finished, but I'm putting it here anyway. One must remember that it's tru size is 60x80.

Advice will be welcomed.

Bird of paradise )

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eumelia February 15 2008, 06:28:31 UTC
It's beautiful, as usual, but there doesn't seem to be anything unifying in the picture, I mean in a way it looks like a few shapes put together for no purpose.

The first thing that came into my head was perhaps a line (as in פס או קו) of some kind that would show a kind of cohesiveness, but I have no idea what it would do to the composition... yeah, shutting up now.

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tamara_russo February 18 2008, 15:38:05 UTC
Thanks for the advice, it was taken into account, and thanks for the support!

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