Some interesting characters: Opening Scenes
DISCLAIMER:This is still a little rough so its kind of in screenplay and story mode, hope its still clear enough to get the jist of the scenes. Please forgive any grammar errors, I was writing this in a very viceral and explosive way, as I imagined the scenes I tried to put them down. I tried to use colors to denote speakers and sounds rather than constantly explaining who was speaking. If you actually read this let me know what you think, I'm curious how others will interpret this.
Il Veleno (The poison)
The Scene opens with 2 large men in black suits and sunglasses lying still on the floor next to a man in his underwear, blood running from red eyes and foam dripping from pale blue lips. A tall gaunt man in a hotel uniform finishes buttoning his jacket. He takes a food cart onto an elevator and heads to the pent house.
Scene Switches to a fat sweaty bald man yelling red in the face into a phone “God dammit this is my fucking life here” “who did they send?…..Oh FUCK!! He’s a specialist we used him 5 years back…I’m dead, fucking dead! Send some more damn body guards!!!(more calmly) Ok Ok your right….I'm just freakin out. I made sure this place was secure no one knows where the hell I am but me. Got guards everywhere” “I’m leaving in 2 hours weather your ready or not!.” Slamming down the phone he paces nervously stomach grumbling.
The gaunt man steps out of the elevator and there are 3 large men wearing shades, one tells him to put his hands up and put them against the wall while he metal scans and pats him down, the other two open the tray looking nervously at it. One eats a piece of the steak and lobster another sips both the wines. They wait anxiously, after a few moments they stop sweating and allow the waiter into the room.
“Its about damn time how fucking long does it take to cook a fucking steak!!!”-spits the fat man. “ I apologize sir but I had to pass through 4 sets of your guards to get here each one examining me and everything else, of course that’s going to take some time” SLAP, the tubby man backhands the waiter…”don’t you ever fucking talk to me like that shithead, I’ll skin you alive while I put your family through a friggin wood chipper if it happens again” Obsequiously the waiter concedes, serving the food at the dinner table and suggesting 2 wines for the meal. The fatman begins chomping and gulping the food down using mostly his hands pieces falling from his mouth and hands. “ Well what are you fuggn waiting for?!? Give me some fuggn wine wage-slave.” Pouring both a glass of red and a glass of white the man reaches for one looking into the waiters eyes…no wait… you drink those…both of them, Sir I’m not allowed to drink on the job. Producing a gun “ DO IT ASSHOLE!!” Both of the wines are gulped down nervously than a look of confusion from the waiter. The door opens, “Boss everything ok??” “Did I say to fucking open that damn door shit head, get the hell out of here, and keep an eye out…ok retard a glass of the red” Pouring the wine “good choice sir” fading into a whimper. The Fatman belching finishes the last of the food. After a moment the waiter looks at his watch “ What am I keeping you from getting ass fucked by your boyfriend?!” An eerie smile begins to spread across the gaunt waiters face.
“ There will be a tightening of the throat preventing screams as well as a paralyzing effect in your extremities, heart rate will increase sweating and great pain in the belly, oh I can see you are getting there, good. You will start to hemorrhage from various orifices and begin to cough up your stomach lining and digestive juices in foamy liquid. Yes you’ve got it there, well done. Than, and this is the point you will love, as the pain becomes unbearable the throat will tighten more and you will begin suffocating on your own vomit. So between involuntary vomiting and difficulty breathing your lungs begin to fill with digestive juices and bile. The pain here really is the worse, as you can tell now. “ showing him his watch “look at that, even though it feels like an eternity we are at about 2 minutes after the onset…neat huh” “so any last words…u have like 10 seconds or so?” gargling “Lrghgllfgl” yea that’s what the last guy said…weird.”
Butcher Bruce
Scene opens in a very stylish meeting room in a high story building, there are many suits sitting at a table all looking up at a man giving a presentation on a large screen.
Scene changes 3 security guards bodies lay chopped to pieces in front of closing elevator doors. Ding…a huge man with rippling muscles and strange junkyard looking armor is seen as the doors open, he has an axe and a large rusty butcher’s cleaver. He leaps out and begins violently chopping and hacking the 2 surprised guards near elevator, as well as 3 suits within reach. (describe horrifically)
From the meeting room a scuffle is heard people look towards the door as the speaker tries to continue with the meeting. BOOM the door shatters inward. The mountain of a man covered in blood laughing kills the 3 suits next to the door, than pulls a crumpled piece of bloody news paper with a picture on it. He scans the room looking at each person there, His eyes meet with one face and go wide as he jumps onto the table sliding and body tackles the presenter. He than pulls 2 large meat cleavers out and begins violently chopping the guy over and over and over again, screams fill the whole room as people scrabbling out in panic and fear. Looking down on the meat that was once a man with an evil smile on his face and a far away look , he quickly leaps to the window. He bashes it open with a head-butt attaches some gear to the sill and bungies down the buildings side, flipping the bird upwards while he falls, as the cord begins to go taught he cuts it landing in a rusty dented convertible with the engine already running. He hits the gas and squeals off lighting a cigar hitting 2 pedestrians as he leaves
Bushidenko (electric warrior)
A large fit Asian man with long dragon tattoos on his arms and chest is surveying the Tokyo skyscape from his pent house window.(thump…THUMP) he hears a strange noise from another window. As he looks he has a surprised and inquisitive look on his face. Outside the window is a 3-4’ foot saucer like object with multiple ports and camera lenses. In an instant there is a white spray on the window cracking it immediately as the liquid nitrogen hits it. Next there is the flash of twin suppressed machine guns firing full bore into the room, while small jets keep the saucer from moving backward. The Yakuza falls to the ground covered in broken glass and riddled with small caliber bullet wounds. As saucer moves into window reacquiring its mark it continues firing on the fallen man till there is an empty clicking noise. 2 arms sprouts from a port, one has a spinning saw at the end another a 3 clawed hand. The mans head is removed and placed within a bag that is vacuum sealed. The saucer than leaves out the window and heads quickly down the many stories of the building. Into the top of a van that has a man wearing strange tech gear, goggles arm and hand casing connected with multiple wires to a large computer, the van has cameras all over. As he pulls his helm off and grabs the head he shouts “YATA” The van than begins to head off.
The Devil
A very handsome man is flirting with a pretty girl behind the counter of a hotel. After some time ( when he can tell she’s hooked he casually asks her if he could see what its like to be back there. “ I have stayed in 100 hotels and always wondered what its like to be on the other side” “ I don’t know she says biting her lip” “Oh come on, I would take it as a personal favor. I know after your done here I’ll take you out to dinner” giggling she concedes and switches places. “Now pretend you’re a customer, a really important one” She looks down giggling like a school girl. He asks her all sorts of silly questions charactering a hotel employee, during this time he is actually scanning the system for names and known aliases. Finally the screen stops on a penthouse room, he shakes his head thinking “always the penthouse…pride comes before the fall“ He promptly stops the game clears the screen and moves out from behind the counter. He than kisses the young girls hand and recites some romantic line from Shakespeare about lost love as he heads to the elevator. Once inside the elevator he pulls out a sleek gun and attaches a silencer while whistling some happy tune. He puts his coat over the gun in his left hand, and pulls a keycard out. As he exits the elevator he continues to whistle passing a door with 2 large men in very nice suits and shades, he continues passing them as thou they are nothing surprising and heads to nearest door inserting his key card. Looking back at them he moves a little towards them with a smile. “ Hey guys, do you know anything about great places to go here in town, food girls excitement” After some time the guards relax and begin laughing and joking, they tell him about the crazy strip club they went to with there buddies Vinnie and Rocko motioning inside the door behind them. “ Hey when you guyz get off work we should hit someplace” they nod and agree. He walks towards his door and than turns around as if to ask a question “If only you understood the irony” They look at him smiling as he double taps them, one bullet in the brain and heart for each (Pa-Pap Pa-Pap). After grabbing a keycard from them he knocks on the door and mimicking one of the goons “ Yo Vinnie I gotta take a mad leak, I’m coming in” There is a wide eyed look on the goons faces as he double taps Vinnie and Rocko and points his gun at a man reaching for his own “ I wouldn’t”…” I have been sent here to get information, I don’t want to know what/who/where it is just the information, they said you would understand, if I do not get the info I’m to kill you. Now I could have killed you at Chicas last night or the Royal Casino before if I wanted you dead” “This is supposed to be more of an extreme warning , but my pay is the same with you dead or alive. I hate torture so I like to simplify things. Think of all the things you cherish and love” He than raises the gun points it at the mans head clicking the hammer back and says “I will only ask you once, what is the information” “Blue Labrador 5”mumbles the man “Thanks” Pa-pap Pa-pap . He than drags the goons inside quickly and puts up the do not disturb sign. After he has removed the bodies from the hall he than heads up the maintenance ladder to the roof, pulls out a metal device with handles, he wraps it over a metal wire connecting this building to a building several stories shorter and yards away, he begins sliding down the cable to a building , and than again to another one with a chopper he than flies off whistling the whole way.
Tomashi Yamagoto
Columbia: Even thou night has fallen the air is still very sultry. There is a compound with 100s of guards, a small army. In the darkness there is a figure dressed head to toe in black. His breathing and heart beat start increasing. Suddenly he springs forward in an incredible sprint straight towards the compound and the army in front and inside. Once he clears the brush the men there are surprise and completely caught off guard. The dark figure flips up onto the shoulders of the nearest guard than proceeds to leap from man to man springing forward from their head and shoulders. He whips to his left and poisoned spikes hit dropping 5 men, he throws a small smoke bomb actually loaded with nerve gas 13 men fall to the ground convulsing. Guns belching lead in every direction men dropping from their comrade’s fire, as the dark figure continues to move ahead dropping to the ground sprinting forward. As he passes near 4 men the light catches something in his hands for an instant. The men grab there bellies at entrails begin to spill out onto the dusty ground. As he charges the wall he sees a man signaling to others as the man’s arm is raised the dark figure throws 3 spikes in an instant the mans palm wrist and forearm are nailed to the fence behind him. With a tremendous leap the shadow jumps onto the soldier runs up his arm and the spikes, flips almost over the tall fence, he sticks a dagger into it and transfers his movement twisting and over the fence. As he drops the 20’ feet to the other side he tuck and rolls to a complete stop. He sees more men running towards the gates to help outside, things have happened so quick there is still mass chaos out side. The shadow pulls a small remote control out and pushes the button, at once there are huge explosions from all sides of the compound as well as the sounds of gun fire. In the chaos he moves forward towards a generator outside and the main power cable, avoiding 3 charging men and slitting the throats of 2 more. Once there he places explosives at each. He than slowly moves from shadow to shadow into the main building listening for guards as he moves upstairs. He sees a guard looking his direction and can hear him arguing with another around the corner, as soon as the man turns his head away to disagree with his friend the shadow pounces on him putting his blade through the mans skull behind the ear, he falls limply. After his reply goes unanswered the other man moves around the corner, the instant he moves around the corner a blade comes up through is chin mouth and brain killing him instantly. With a silent sprint the shadow is low and at the side of a large doorway. Another click from the remote, 2 explosions, and complete darkness descends instantly. At the same time he kicks in the door and jumps low and to the left as bullets spray the wall and doorway. A small grenade is tossed towards the men and there is a tremendous flash of light and deafening boom. Guards firing wildly while a man is shouting for more soldiers, the slick black figure moves from man to man until there is only the voice of the man calling for help, becoming more and more afraid and desperate. A clip is dropped as he reloads his gun in the completely silent room, moments pass and than he realizes he never heard the clip fall to the ground. Swallowing dryly as he breaks into a cold sweat he backs up against the wall he stumbles rifle and man wobble and tumble back. Panting he finally has his back against the wall. He begins cursing at the top of his voice, than pleading , crying , and prayers. Suddenly there is a flash of bright red eyes in front of the drug lord he pulls the trigger of his ak-47…Click…click click click. The safety is on. Blades moving with incredible speed gleam red for an instant as the man cries out in pain, tendons in both hands severed, the gun drops to ground. The red eyed shadow speaks softly “ Jorge Montego…Pedro Dominguez…Maria Sanches…Diego Alameda…” “ I don’t understand “…more names are recited “ who …what..” “ THESE are the names of people you have murdered . I do not have enough time till dawn to recite them all, they are the reason you will be burning in hell before the sun rises. Whimpering crying”…please…please” the shadow stops the begging abruptly ” how many had asked you for mercy?”. Blades out again 4 flashes and with them the Drug lord’s leg tendons are severed, his belly opens up spilling onto the floor and a cut across his throat stops any future speaking…or screaming. “The wound is mortal, you will die alone in the dark unable to cry for help. Even in all of this your punishment is not enough.” The figure moves towards the window opening it he looks back at the mess that was a man “I will leave you this last wound…if I did this to you, imagine what I will do to your family.” As the assassin leaps out the window the man lays there in agony, his screams a mere whisper as he dies slowly. His breath stops minutes before dawn.