Haunted

Oct 10, 2011 18:56

Title: Haunted
Author: TalliW
Characters: Jenny Lewis, Nick Cutter
Rating: K
Disclaimer: Primeval is the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to the wonderful Fredbassett for beta duty.
Summary: Jenny is haunted by a ghost from her past

AN: Written for Cutter’s Lab, Fic challenge No. 28: Visiting Nick's grave ( Read more... )

nick cutter, nick/jenny, jenny lewis, author:talliw

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reggietate October 10 2011, 17:44:05 UTC
That was terrific, a great take on the prompt :-)

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talliw October 10 2011, 18:05:06 UTC
Thank you. It was a wonderful prompt too.

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lukadreaming October 10 2011, 17:50:29 UTC
Lovely, atmospheric story! I like the happy ending for Jenny and Nick, although I do feel rather sorry for Michael. And LOL at Connor not being able to keep a secret.

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talliw October 10 2011, 18:14:03 UTC
Thank you. I think there was no way for Jenny to handle this without hurting Michael one way or another. But I like to think she did contact him later so that he would stop worrying.

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telperion_15 October 10 2011, 19:00:57 UTC
Lovely! It had a brilliant atmosphere to it - Jenny just vanishing like that was delightfully eerie, even though we know what happened to her :)

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talliw October 10 2011, 22:33:46 UTC
Thank you. I liked the thought that Jenny would follow her heart and run away with Cutter.

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knitekat October 10 2011, 22:07:34 UTC
Lovely though bittersweet (for Micheal) fic.

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talliw October 10 2011, 22:37:15 UTC
I think Jenny will sent him a message or pay him a visit so he stops worrying. That won't spare him the pain of losing her but at least he will know she's alive.

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knitekat October 11 2011, 18:59:28 UTC
*nods* She would.

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freddiejoey October 11 2011, 10:16:07 UTC
This was pretty and evocative.

Poor Michael maybe - but I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Lovely.

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