Shades of Grey Chapter 7

Aug 17, 2010 16:56


Title: Shades of Grey Chapter 7
Author: TalliW
Characters: Stephen Hart, Tom Ryan, Nick Cutter, James Lester, Abby Maitland, Connor Temple, Jenny Lewis, Oliver Leek, Lyle, Finn, Helen Cutter, Ditzy
Rating: K+, T in later chapters
Disclaimer: Primeval is the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Lyle and Finn belong to Fredbassett.
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nick cutter, stephen hart, jenny lewis, author:talliw, shades of grey, james lester, tom ryan, abby maitland, connor temple

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nietie August 17 2010, 15:41:42 UTC
Having kids is exhausting ;)

Lovely chapter. In a way I don't want Tom to become Ryan again. He's sweet.

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talliw August 18 2010, 21:26:35 UTC
Oh, yes. Stephen will learn that soon enough. Still who can get angry at such a little darling... :)

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lukadreaming August 17 2010, 16:13:14 UTC
That's a great image at the end of them asleep. And LOL at the mealtime and Cutter ending up with all the vegetables! I can so picture in my mind everything that's happening in this wonderful fic!

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talliw August 18 2010, 21:28:35 UTC
Seems I have done something right then.:)
I'm so glad you like the story as far.

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reggietate August 17 2010, 19:35:52 UTC
"I swear the method was always successful with me when I was a child. With a spoonful for you and a spoonful for me, the plate was empty in a jiffy."

"I've no doubt about that, Cutter. But I rather intended Tom to eat the vegetables. Instead he managed to deflect most of his spoonfuls onto you. And you let it happen."

"Well, I was hungry. And the broccoli was really good."

LOL. I love that bit. But I'm getting a definite vibe that it'll end up being Tom who does all the work of bringing Nick and Stephen together! :-) He's already worked out how to avoid broccoli.

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talliw August 18 2010, 21:30:50 UTC
Or Ryan could get another reason for them to argue.;)

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fredbassett August 17 2010, 20:00:04 UTC
Loved the eating scene! I think Ryan has definitely got the measure of Cutter. *g*

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talliw August 18 2010, 21:33:58 UTC
This way both are happy. Ryan hasn't had to eat the broccoli and Cutter has got a decent meal for once.:)

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knitekat August 19 2010, 00:03:28 UTC
Aww, Ryan's a cutie - loved the eating bit at the end. Good point from Lester re how Ryan survived, and liked the bit where Ryan wrong footed him.

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talliw August 19 2010, 10:27:47 UTC
Cutter and Stephen only worry about Ryan whereas Lester tries to keep in mind the whole picture.
But I bet an outspoken wee!Ryan is another thing Lester wasn't prepared for.:)

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