Secret Santa Story: Traces In The Snow Part 1/3

[talliw]

Secret Santa story written for Knitekat

I hope you like your present. Otherwise I offer a refund and you will get another story.

Comments

[knitekat]

Purrrrssss happily. So many good bits - such as the visits by Santa, esp. Ryan's list of being a bad boy and Connor's hug for Lester. And sad bits - aww, *hugs* Lester, what a horrible Christmas present his wife gave him. No wonder he hates Christmas, and it explains why he went with them.

[fififolle]

This is lovely! Quite supernatural and poor Ryan and Lester!

[fredbassett]

The bits with Father Christmas were lovely! I adored the idea of Ryan being told off for not phoning his mum and frightening the neighbour's pug! And yay for James having been a good boy.

I love the slow build up to something not quite normal, yet wholly believable throughout this part of the story.

[telperion_15]

LOL, I love them all dreaming of Father Christmas! :D And Nikolaus is certainly a mysterious character... *g*

[deinonychus_1]

this is very atmospheric. Poor Lester, the bit where Connor hugged him was sweet.