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talliw

Not A Fairy Tale 14/16

Jul 12, 2009 00:33

Title: Not A Fairy Tale 14
Author: TalliW
Pairings: Lester/Cutter!clone
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Primeval is the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to Fredbassett for beta-reading. I couldn't have done it without you.

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danny quinn, james lester, nick clone, author:talliw, connor temple, abby maitland

Comments 18

knitekat July 11 2009, 23:55:41 UTC

Poor James.. it's good Danny's around to shock some common sense into him. His needs to understand it will take time to improve, to come to terms with his accident.

talliw July 12 2009, 01:29:33 UTC

Nick his Lester's weak point. Danny knows now how he can make Lester see sense when he acts irrationally.

knitekat July 12 2009, 20:24:32 UTC

No doubt a useful thing to know at the moment!

knitekat July 11 2009, 23:57:36 UTC

Grr.. my computer's playing up tonight..

To continue:

Lovely hot sex... Nick is good for James. And will not let him forget his promise.. mmm.
Realistic that Connor and Abby are the slowest to welcome Nick. As is Nick's reason for staying at the ARC, and with James.

Love this fic!

talliw July 12 2009, 01:38:16 UTC

Thank you. Only two parts to go.:)
I think Nick's presence helps Connor to get to terms with Cutter's death. He can talk with Nick about things he wouldn't tell anyone else. Knowing a part of Cutter lives on in Nick makes it easier to go on for Connor.

knitekat July 12 2009, 20:30:39 UTC

Eek over only 2 more parts to go!

auntypam July 12 2009, 01:33:25 UTC

I'm getting really attached to this pairing, and always look foward to next installment. I hope you continue to write this pairing after this series. Your perspective is wonderful : )

talliw July 12 2009, 01:44:10 UTC

For now the story will be finished with part 16. I got very attached to the clone as well but I don't think I will have the energy and time to continue afterwards. But never say never. First I have to finish the other project then I will see if there will be more adventures of clone Nick.

rusty_armour July 12 2009, 04:27:02 UTC

Ooooh! I've been in a wicked mood for hurt/comfort, so this latest part was very satisfying! :-) I really liked seeing Lester being so stubborn about what he could and couldn't do. I thought it was great when Danny managed to get through to him by pointing out that he shouldn't put Nick's life in danger by driving himself. I also got a kick out of how sweet and protective Nick was towards Lester once they got him home.

In addition to all those Nick/Lester moments, I really enjoyed that last scene with Nick and Connor. It's interesting that Nick feels as if he should have rescued Helen and that he feels responsible for Cutter's death. I also loved the way Nick summed up his connection to Lester. :-)

talliw July 12 2009, 17:05:30 UTC

Nick is Lester's week point. Danny has realised that now and will probably use it every time Lester doesn't see sense.:)
Nick still has a connection to Helen. She has created him and he feels responsible for her and her action. I think it would be horrible for him if he ever had to chose between Lester and Helen.

bella_farfalla July 12 2009, 11:51:15 UTC

*sniffles* That last line was absolutely beautiful.

Aw heck the whole thing was beautiful.

talliw July 12 2009, 14:04:52 UTC

*hands a hanky*
Thank you. I glad you like it.