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talliw

Primeval WIP: Dating (40/...)

Jun 16, 2009 20:28

Title: Dating (40/...)
Author: TalliW
Pairings: Lester/Cutter, Stephen/Lyle, Abby/ Connor
Rating: M
Disclaimer: Primeval is the property of Impossible Pictures. I write just for fun.
Lyle belongs to Fredbassett.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to Fredbassett for beta-reading. I couldn't have done it without you.

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het, primeval, jenny lewis, author:talliw, slash, stephen/lyle, abby/connor, lester/cutter

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telperion_15 June 16 2009, 19:22:11 UTC

This is such a lovely chapter, with things finally starting to go right for everyone, but still with that little sting in the tail at the end. Although I'm intrigued who Jenny's 'admirer' might be... :)

talliw June 16 2009, 22:40:19 UTC

Thank you. There has to b some progress finally.:)

sunsets_dinos June 16 2009, 19:43:00 UTC

Squeeee! Oh I'm so glad Nick and James are making progress!!!! And *happy dance* for Stephen/Lyle as always! Poor Abby and Connor though. :( BUt Babyface babysitting them is cute. :)

talliw June 16 2009, 22:44:16 UTC

Babyface has probably the worst job right now whilst the others have fun.

*grins about your icon*

lukadreaming June 16 2009, 20:49:47 UTC

This is such a gorgeous ep! Loved the conversation between Nick and Lester, and Nick offering to show him his fossil collection. And the Stephen/Lyle scenes were lovely.

Eek, worried about sting in tail and who Jenny's watcher might be!

talliw June 16 2009, 22:48:18 UTC

Glad you liked it. Stephen and Lyle are definitely a good match and Nick tries his best to get Lester back.

fififolle June 16 2009, 20:55:33 UTC

Now just wait a minute!! Who's watching Cutter and Lester?? OMG, it's not... !! and is that the same person mucking with Jenny's head. Damn!
More hot Stephen/Lyle, and oh! awkward Lester/Cutter intimate moment... *flail*

talliw June 16 2009, 22:50:31 UTC

Ahem, I'm afraid you'll have to wait some more before your question will be answered.:)

knitekat June 16 2009, 21:43:56 UTC

Yay for everyone making progress. Love poor Banyface playing chaparone. And Lester trying on several suits.. and then the awkwardness of last time they wore the suits.. and them at the restaurant. Nick's chat up lines need more work and *snort* over his shirt fetish. Hugs James for his flashback.
But who is watching them.. and who has sent Jenny flowers.

talliw June 16 2009, 22:54:25 UTC

Nick is very out of practice but Lester has made it easy for him so far.

knitekat June 17 2009, 21:25:52 UTC

Probably cos he knows if he doesn't they will never get anywhere.. (g)

talliw June 17 2009, 21:33:01 UTC

That could be. He is the wisest of them after all.:)

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