Part 1, Chapter 6

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The next few months were among the most confusing and conflicted of Ennis’ life.

He knew what would have happened if David hadn’t turned away when he had, recognized the gathering storm in him and the point when lightning was going to strike, no two ways about it. They’d have been on the ground together next to that stream, doing another kind of

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[ky77ccl]

oh yikes, how intense. i'm not quite sure how Ennis is making it from day to day...

but this probably how some of us have lived with our own brokeback fever?

as always,
patiently awaiting more... but needing more of jack, or more of david, or more of something...
=)
Kelly

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[talkstocoyotes]

Yeah, this is the end of the first part of the story, where Ennis is making a very difficult transition in accepting his own sexuality. I would have preferred to do it faster, but Ennis in this story is based on the version of Ennis in the film and he just refused to hurry. Just as well, as big changes start happening over the next few chapters.

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[talkstocoyotes]

And I can't believe I actually failed to catch that "macaroni and bee casserole" typo. The Twists weren't THAT poor.

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[gnashsang]

bees, LMAO! :D

i love how david leaned forward in the dim light with his arresting grey eyes in the last chapter!!

will read more later... thanks,, xoxo

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[talkstocoyotes]

LOL, I figured you'd like that one!

My physical model for David is a rather obscure actor named Hans Mathieson. His biggest credits are two TV miniseries productions: Mordred in The Mists of Avalon and Yuri Zhivago in a TV remake of Doctor Zhivago. He looks rather villainous in the former and dorky in the latter, but he's about as close as it gets to how I picture David looking.

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[gnashsang]

hmm, i'll have to google him. dorky villain huh? that's a twist.

ohh i saw a pic of him in canon inverso.. yummy. :D cool... in other pics he looks like a young ethan hawke, almost. his yury pics are also very nice. mm, cuddle up to that on a cold russian night! ^_^