BY THE TIME I GET TO PHOENIX (Simon/Atherton Wing; NC-17)

[executrix]

Backup story written for woodsong_1978, who wanted Simon/Atherton Wing, delayed gratification, and toys

Comments

[lunabee34]

This is seriously awesome, Exec. Hot like a fire. A burning, burning fire.

Yum.

[executrix]

Thanks! Ummm, I kind of thought it was a turn-on myself. I usually have a humiliation squick, but I guess this time everybody was having fun, so I said whatthehell.

[fayroberts]

Thank you - good voices, good fun, nothing too... how do I put this...? It was Inarra and Simon, so it needed to be elegant; a bit icy and un-tawdry.

But also hot. Oh hell yeah.

[executrix]

Happy to oblige, fayroberts. I tend toward the R portion of the spectrum rather than NC-17 because it's tragically easy to write about something that one wants to sound really exciting and sexy but to bring in the "Euwwww, YUCK!" instead.

[alixtii]

Very interesting. Nice work!

[executrix]

Thanks, alixtii. To paraphrase Saki, "smut at short notice was her specialty"--sometimes having to write something in a hurry concentrates the mind!

[wildannuette]

Oh my, hot and kinky and well, hot! *grins* Love how Atherton's so deeply submissive and Simon enjoys himself with it. The last part between Inara and Atherton made me giggle, but I'd love to see Atherton come face to face with Simon again, for round too or role reversal but definitely come together again :)

[executrix]

Thanks, wildannuette. Where would prodommes be without rich people who want somebody to yell at them and kick their asses? However, while I don't think you can get Simon quite as furious by being mean to Inara as you can get Mal by being mean to Kaylee, I don't think it gets you any points toward a second date.

[executrix]

Glad you like it!

"Shindig" is sort of a 'Verse version of "Pretty in Pink" (at least with the original and MUCH BETTER ending)--snobby rich people are not your friends! The people who really understand and care about you are your friends!