About Me (Moriah Miller)

[singmoriah]

Here is information about me with my picture. Enjoy!

Comments

[breech]

I give you a 8 because your poetry seems different.

By the way, I love that movie Now and Then. It has a lot of things to think about.

I can't wait to maybe hear your wonderful voice in the future. :)

[singmoriah]

Thank you, I first have to figure out how I can record my voice and put it on the computer. Could you help?

[breech]

Do you have sound recorder on your computer? Do you have a microphone for your computer?

[singmoriah]

I have a microphone, but not too sure on the sound recorder. Do you mean like ITunes or Winamp?

[pinkbraces]

I give you an 8.5.

I liked a lot of your interests and your poetry is very nice.

<3

[singmoriah]

Thanks!

[abadoss]

Hmm... I coulda sworn that I just posted a review... that's odd...

Anyway, I gave you an 8.5 for your poetry... if my other comment suddenly decides to reappear, then it will have my critique on it... man, that's weird...

[singmoriah]

Thanks, but if it doesn't could you critique it again?

[abadoss]

Sure. Basically, I think that it was thought through and it flowed well. The extra rhyme in the fourth couplet was an added bonus. Some of it seems a little like you were forcing the rhyme more than the content, but it's not that noticeable. Overall, it's well done. Keep it up.

[singmoriah]

Thanks for the critique, some of it might have been forced as I was trying to be introspective but really I just try to let my poems flow out of me.

[breech]

I'm accepting you because I really liked that poem and I like you.

Welcome.